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In your opinion what are the qualities of a good friend Use specific details and examples in your answer v.2

In your opinion what are the qualities of a good friend Use specific details and examples in your answer v. 2
Friends are people who we coomunicate closely with and share our lives with. Personally, I think that friends have to be responsible and positive. There are a few reasons why I hold this stance. First of all, I have to count on my friend when I need her help. There are different situations people face in life in which they need help of others, and if there is a person who is able to support them when they need it, they can consider the indidvidual a friend. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Back in Russia, I have a woman who is a close friend of mine. I know that if I ask her to do something important to me, she always will do it. In this way, when I moved to the United States and asked her to take care of a cat I left behind, she promised to look after the animal, and she did that. She took him to her house and provided him with shalter, food and love right to the moment I was able to transport the cat to the U. S. To that end, a reliable friend always keeps her or his word and therefore, helps us to overcome difficulties in life. Secondly, positive nature of a friend helps us to keep up with life and never give up. When a friend we spend a lot of time with is negative and sees life in dark collors, it can be imposible to enjoy friendship. Conversaly, when a firend encougares us when we feel frustrated, it makes life colorful and less stressful. For instanse, my friend Tania, who I mentioned above, is an incedibly optimistic and funny person. She makes a lot of jockes all the time, so it is always pleasantly to be around her. In this way, when I feel depressed, she supports me with her hilarious stories and jockes which helps me to relax, forget about my problems and enjoy our communication. That is why having a positive friend is pivotal for me. To conclude, I strongly believe, that a great friend is the one who is reliable and cheerful. This is because it helps me to overcome difficulties and stay in well emotional shape.
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have to
be responsible and
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. There are a few reasons why I hold this stance.

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First of all
, I
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have to
count on my
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friend
when I need her
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help
. There are
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different
situations
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people
face in
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life
in which they need
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help
of others, and if there is a person
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who
is able to support them when they need it, they can consider the
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indidvidual
a
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friend
. My
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own
experience is a compelling example of this. Back in Russia, I have a woman
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who
is a close
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friend
of mine. I know that if I ask her to do something
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important
to me, she
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it. In this way, when I
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moved
to the United States and asked her to take care of a cat I
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left
behind, she promised to look after the animal, and she did that. She took him to her
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house
and provided him with
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shalter
, food and
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love
right to the moment I was able to transport the cat to the U. S. To that
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end
, a reliable
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friend
always
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her or his word and
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,
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us to overcome difficulties in life.

Secondly
,
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nature of a
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friend
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helps
us to
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keep
up with
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and never give up. When a
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friend
we spend
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time with is
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and
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sees
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life
in dark
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, it can be
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imposible
to enjoy friendship.
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, when a
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firend
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encougares
us when we feel frustrated, it
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makes
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colorful and less stressful. For
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instanse
, my
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friend
Tania,
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I mentioned above, is an
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incedibly
optimistic and
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funny
person. She
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makes
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a lot of
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all the time,
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it is always
pleasantly
to be around her. In this way, when I feel depressed, she supports me with her hilarious stories and
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jockes
which
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helps
me to relax, forget about my problems and enjoy our communication.
That is
why having a
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positive
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friend
is pivotal for me.

To conclude
, I
strongly
believe, that a great
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friend
is the one
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who
is reliable and cheerful. This is
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because
it
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helps
me to overcome difficulties and stay in well emotional shape.
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26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay In your opinion what are the qualities of a good friend Use specific details and examples in your answer v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
376 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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