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In today's world, traffic is becoming a major issue. What do think that the role of society and individual to solve this problem v.1

In today's world, traffic is becoming a major issue. What do think that the role of society and individual to solve this problem v. 1
In this contemporary era, traffic congestion on roads are becoming a global issue. It is increasing day by day and has become a cause of several environmental problems, such as global warming, air and noise pollution. This essay will describe the measures or steps should be taken by society and individuals to reduce the volume of traffic on roads in the subsequent paragraphs. To begin with, society should take some measures to alleviate traffic clogging. Firstly, awareness programs should be organized by non-government organisation. These programs aware people about the detrimental effect of traffic on environment and human health. For example, global warming is increasing due to release carbon dioxide and accidents are increasing day by day. Therefore, this might decrease the problem of traffic congestion on roads. Moreover, improvement of public transport should be done by the government. It encourages people to use more buses and trains for travelling to work instead of private vehicles. Consequently, these steps taken by the government will definitely reduce the amount of traffic. It is the responsibility of individuals to take some concern of increase the number of vehicles on roads. Primarily, they travel by bicycles for short distances instead of motorbikes. This also helps to stay healthy. As a result, it will alleviate traffic problems. Furthermore, car-pooling is another solution for reducing the volume of traffic. To illustrate, commuters in Delhi share their vehicles with neighbours for travelling. In conclusion, undoubtedly traffic on roads is becoming a serious issue of concern in all nations. Both society and individuals should take steps such as awareness programs and use public transport to mitigate jam problem
In this contemporary era,
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traffic
congestion on
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roads
are becoming a global issue. It is increasing day by day and has become a cause of several environmental
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problems
, such as global warming, air and noise pollution. This essay will
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describe
the measures or steps should
be taken
by society and individuals to
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reduce
the volume of
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traffic
on
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roads
in the subsequent paragraphs.

To
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begin
with, society should take
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some
measures to alleviate
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traffic
clogging.
Firstly
, awareness programs should
be organized
by non-
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government
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organisation
. These programs aware
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people
about the detrimental effect of
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traffic
on environment and human health.
For example
, global warming is increasing due to release carbon dioxide and accidents are increasing day by day.
Therefore
, this might decrease the
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problem
of
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traffic
congestion on
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roads
.
Moreover
, improvement of public transport should
be done
by the
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government
. It encourages
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people
to
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use
more buses and trains for travelling to work
instead
of private vehicles.
Consequently
, these steps taken by the
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government
will definitely
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reduce
the amount of traffic.

It is the responsibility of individuals to take
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some
concern of increase the number of vehicles on
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roads
.
Primarily
, they travel by bicycles for short distances
instead
of motorbikes. This
also
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helps
to stay healthy.
As a result
, it will alleviate
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traffic
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problems
.
Furthermore
, car-pooling is another solution for reducing the volume of
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traffic
. To illustrate, commuters in Delhi share their vehicles with
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neighbours
for travelling.

In conclusion
,
undoubtedly
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traffic
on
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roads
is becoming a serious issue of concern in all nations. Both society and individuals should take steps such as awareness programs and
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use
public transport to mitigate jam
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problem
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS essay In today's world, traffic is becoming a major issue. What do think that the role of society and individual to solve this problem v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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