In this advance time period the life has been made more convenient by technology and it is very feasible for everyone to fulfill their needs in daily life with the help of internet and people can easily stay lonely from each other without any kind of face to face contact. I fully support to this given statement and the varied points of using internet are being described in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, the internet has become an integral part in the life of people due to some innovative features in their pivotal works and every work related to study as well as business relies on internet for accumulating a knowledge. Moreover, it can be clearly seen in this modern era how most of the people are willing to purchase several types of products related to cosmetics and household goods as well as it is an immensely used for business purpose for updating a software and useful application to reduce a human presence. As a result of having a good internet access the business strategies are easily expand by owners.
Further more, in the previous period of life, people had to struggle to communicate without internet but now a days internet has provided a face to face conversation so people can easily communicate with each other through internet and it is the cheapest source for sending an emails to another country. As a result, the major advantage of internet is the creation of jobs for an every ordinary person.
In conclusion, people should understand the value of internet because everything is depend on internet and without internet very difficult to survive in this time period.
In this advance time period the
life
has
been made
more convenient by technology and it is
very
feasible for everyone to fulfill their needs in daily
life
with the
help
of internet and
people
can
easily
stay lonely from each other without any kind of
face
to
face
contact. I
fully
support to this
given
statement and the varied points of using internet are being
described
in upcoming paragraphs.
To
begin
with, the internet has become an integral part in the
life
of
people
due to
some
innovative features in their pivotal works and every work related to study
as well
as business relies on internet for accumulating
a knowledge
.
Moreover
, it can be
clearly
seen
in this modern era how most of the
people
are willing to
purchase
several types of products related to cosmetics and household
goods
as well
as it is an
immensely
used
for business purpose for updating a software and useful application to
reduce
a human presence.
As
a result of having a
good
internet access the business strategies are
easily
expand
by owners.
Further
more, in the previous period of
life
,
people
had to struggle to communicate without internet
but
now a days
internet has provided a
face
to
face
conversation
so
people
can
easily
communicate with each other through internet and it is the cheapest source for sending
an emails
to another country.
As a result
, the major advantage of internet is the creation of jobs for an every ordinary person.
In conclusion
,
people
should understand the value of internet
because
everything is
depend
on internet and without internet
very
difficult to survive in this time period.
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