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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and v.23

In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and v. 23
The opportunity to study abroad is becoming popular for most youth today. It is beneficial for enhancing academic skills while on the other hand it is way for more expensive. Studying abroad is a perfect opportunity to enhance one' s academic skills. Some countries who accept foreign students offer a variety of courses. These courses are linked to different kinds of skills training as part of the program. In addition, most universities offers on-the-job training during the semester. Foreign students have the privilege to access different literatures to assist them in research papers. The United Kingdom accepts foreign students from different parts of the world and offers a wide range of courses. On the other hand, studying abroad is expensive. There are things to be considered when studying abroad. Student must be able to meet the universities standard with regard to accepting foreign students. Universities put into consideration the previous academic record of the student and must meet all the guidelines. Immigration authorities will carefully scrutinize the financial capabilities of the student to support his studies and living expenses while living abroad. The cost of the enrollment is much expensive and international students have to pay more compare to the local students. Some Filipinos have showed interest in studying abroad but because of the important aspects such as the financial matters. Some of them were not able to pursue their plans to study abroad. I therefore conclude that studying abroad is a great opportunity but at the same time a very challenging endeavor.
The opportunity to study
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is becoming popular for most youth
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today
. It is beneficial for enhancing academic
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skills
while
on the other hand
it is way for more expensive.

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abroad
is a perfect opportunity to enhance
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Some
countries who accept
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foreign
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students
offer a variety of courses. These courses
are linked
to
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different
kinds of
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skills
training as part of the program.
In addition
, most universities offers on-the-job training during the semester.
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Foreign
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students
have the privilege to access
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different
literatures to assist them in research papers. The United Kingdom accepts
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foreign
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students
from
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different
parts of the world and offers a wide range of courses.

On the other hand
,
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studying
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abroad
is expensive. There are things to
be considered
when
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studying
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abroad
.
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Student
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must
be able to
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meet
the universities standard with regard to accepting
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foreign
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students
. Universities put into consideration the previous academic record of the
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student
and
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must
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meet
all the guidelines. Immigration authorities will
carefully
scrutinize the financial capabilities of the
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student
to support his studies and living expenses while living
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abroad
. The cost of the enrollment is much expensive and international
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students
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have to
pay more compare to the local
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students
.
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Some
Filipinos have
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showed
interest in
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studying
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abroad
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but
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because
of the
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important
aspects such as the financial matters.
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Some
of them were not able to pursue their plans to study abroad.

I
therefore
conclude that
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studying
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abroad
is a great opportunity
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but
at the same time a
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very
challenging endeavor.
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24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and v. 23

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4 paragraphs
253 words
6.0
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