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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.7

Some people believe that movies and pictures are effective means of communication than the words like letter in recent era. I agree with the given statement owing to the fact that preferences of people have changed to easiness and attractiveness. Also, to go through text is very time consuming and monotonous which is not liked by people of modern world. There are plethora of reasons to agree that the images is considered as effective way to communicate because it is well perceived by audience. When we have to read text people loose interest so, they might not get information intended to teach them contrary to that video clips, picture, movies keeps connecting people and provide information effectively. For example, to convey important news if we publish them in newspaper people might no read them on the contrary when news is given in Television shows audience will get information and react to that situation instantly. Additionally, busy time schedule is major reason for change in preferences of people to switch to virtual aids rather than written form because its easy to understand information in short period of time. On the other hand, in the images creativity can be added to make message effective although in written form if we do that it look unprofessional and childish. Is it the case always? Many professional with good ideas can make written form attractive however, in current scenario it could not meet the changes needed with change in lifestyle. Moreover, variety of languages are spoken in the world due of that reason images or video clips are good way to convey information. For example, one documentary about domestic violence with motion pictures without sound was so effective many people came together and stand against violence. but that is very difficult if we just publish news or send letters. In conclusion, people in this era use photograph or movies as strong tool for communicating rather than letter of text form of communication because the images are attractive and effective way to provide information. The visual communication like picture or movie are entertaining when providing information but written word fail to do that.
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statement owing to the fact that preferences of
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have
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changed
to easiness and attractiveness.
Also
, to go through text is
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time consuming
and monotonous which is not liked by
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people
of modern world.

There are plethora of reasons to
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agree
that the
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images
is considered
as
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effective
way to communicate
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because
it is well perceived by audience. When we
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have to
read text
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people
loose interest
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so
, they might not
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get
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information
intended to teach them contrary to that video clips,
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picture
,
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movies
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keeps
connecting
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people
and provide
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information
effectively
.
For example
, to convey
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important
news if we publish them in newspaper
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people
might
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no
read them
on the contrary
when news is
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given
in Television
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shows
audience will
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get
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information
and react to that situation
instantly
.
Additionally
, busy time schedule is major reason for
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change
in preferences of
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people
to switch to virtual aids
rather
than
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written
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form
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because
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its
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easy to understand
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information
in short period of time.

On the other hand
, in the
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images
creativity can be
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added
to
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make
message
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effective
although in
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written
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form
if we do that it look unprofessional and childish. Is it the case
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always
?
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professional with
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good
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ideas
can
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make
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written
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form
attractive
however
, in
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current
scenario it could not
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meet
the
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changes
needed with
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change
in lifestyle.
Moreover
, variety of languages
are spoken
in the world due of that reason
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images
or video clips are
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good
way to convey
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information
.
For example
, one documentary about domestic violence with motion
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pictures
without sound was
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so
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effective
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many
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people
came together and stand against violence.
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but
that is
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very
difficult if we
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publish news or
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send
letters.

In conclusion
,
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people
in this era
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use
photograph or
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movies
as strong tool for communicating
rather
than letter of text
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form
of communication
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because
the
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images
are attractive and
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effective
way to provide
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information
. The visual communication like
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picture
or
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movie
are entertaining when providing
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information
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written
word fail to do that.
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IELTS essay In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
357 words
6.0
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