The world of technology has changed the ways of fulfilling the preferences of people. People are now no longer dependent on animals for their basic needs such as foods or medicines. I do believe the same, which I will discuss in my essay
There are many reasons behind this saying. First is that now people have become too much aware about the conservation of the animals, because they have knowledge about that they may be extinct with their great use. Hence, they have invented new ways to fulfil their needs. For instance, now people are becoming vegetarian, so that they may don't have to eat animals for their food.
Furthermost, the government has made strict rules to avoid the use of animals for getting food and clothes medicines from wildlife. So people are forced to restrict the use of same. Nowadays, of government found anyone guilty of doing the crime against animals he/she gets fined. For example, Salman Khan and some his friends were punished be government for hunting the black deer in India. So these kind of acts restricts the people from doing illegal acts against animals.
In the conclusion, I believe that there are many reasons behind the less use of animals for making medicines and clothing.
The world of technology has
changed
the ways of fulfilling the preferences of
people
.
People
are
now
no longer dependent on
animals
for their basic needs such as foods or medicines. I do believe the same, which I will discuss in my essay
There are
many
reasons behind this saying.
First
is that
now
people
have become too much aware about the conservation of the
animals
,
because
they have knowledge about that they may be extinct with their great
use
.
Hence
, they have invented new ways to fulfil their needs.
For instance
,
now
people
are becoming vegetarian,
so
that they may don't
have to
eat
animals
for their food.
Furthermost, the
government
has made strict
rules
to avoid the
use
of
animals
for getting food and clothes medicines from wildlife.
So
people
are forced
to restrict the
use
of same. Nowadays, of
government
found anyone guilty of doing the crime against
animals
he/she
gets
fined.
For example
, Salman Khan and
some his friends
were punished
be
government
for hunting the black deer in India.
So
these kind
of acts restricts the
people
from doing illegal acts against animals.
In the conclusion, I believe that there are
many
reasons behind the less
use
of
animals
for making medicines and clothing.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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