Nowadays, lots of companies and industrial centers in all over the world use animals to produce something like food, clothing or medicine for people. A lot of animal lovers and companies have debate about using animals as material in factories.
Most environmental experts believe that many of these things which produce by animals aren’t essential absolutely. They emphasize that using animals to produce something causes to perishing them very fast and it can be perilous for ecosystem undoubtedly. Recent years, lots of people in modern countries altered their type of food and became vegetarian. Comprehensive investigations in Europe countries illustrated that amount of vegetarians in these countries has been grown more than 30% during recent decade. In addition, majority of people in modern countries banned themselves from using clothes which produce with animals. According to last published reports in U. S, one fourth of clothes manufacturing factories have changed their materials to prevent killing animals during recent 5 years.
On the other hand, lots of food companies think that because of people`s interest in utilize meat products, using animals in their produces is unavoidable. In addition, lots of other companies like medicine and clothes producers believe that aberration of past methods and changing materials causes to conflicting them with some unforeseen and unaccustomed issues. Because of these prominent reasons they prefer to continue their method to avoid from considerable challenges in their business.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that by increasing people`s consciousness about animals and ecosystems, number of people which they don’t use animals to produce something will grow sharply. I believe that distribution this attitude can make people more healthy and happy.
Nowadays,
lots
of
companies
and industrial centers in all over the world
use
animals
to
produce
something like food, clothing or medicine for
people
. A
lot
of
animal
lovers and
companies
have debate about using
animals
as material in factories.
Most environmental experts believe that
many
of these things which
produce
by
animals
aren’t essential
absolutely
. They emphasize that using
animals
to
produce
something causes to perishing them
very
fast
and it can be perilous for ecosystem
undoubtedly
. Recent years,
lots
of
people
in modern
countries
altered their type of food and became vegetarian. Comprehensive investigations in Europe
countries
illustrated that amount of vegetarians in these
countries
has
been grown
more than 30% during recent decade.
In addition
,
majority of
people
in modern
countries
banned themselves from using clothes which
produce
with
animals
. According to last published reports in U. S, one fourth of clothes manufacturing factories have
changed
their materials to
prevent
killing
animals
during recent 5 years.
On the other hand
,
lots
of food
companies
think
that
because
of
people`s
interest in utilize meat products, using
animals
in their
produces
is unavoidable.
In addition
,
lots
of other
companies
like medicine and clothes producers believe that aberration of past methods and changing materials causes to conflicting them with
some
unforeseen and unaccustomed issues.
Because
of these prominent reasons they prefer to continue their method to avoid from considerable challenges in their business.
In conclusion
, it is undeniable that by increasing
people`s
consciousness about
animals
and ecosystems, number of
people
which they don’t
use
animals
to
produce
something will grow
sharply
. I believe that distribution this attitude can
make
people
more healthy and happy.
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