In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals as food or other products, such as medicines and clothing. Do you agree or disagree? v.3
In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals as food or other products, such as medicines and clothing. v. 3
Nowadays, there is a significant number of products made from animals like food or clothes can be replaced by other modern way. Although I agree with this trend, I also argue that we still need animal products to some extent.
On the one hand, it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer. To begin with, animals are used to be the major sources of materials to produce the outfit, until now some wealthy people in many developed countries still use skin of animals for making their clothes. However, this is the modern century, so there are a huge of materials can replace the animals’ skin. Furthermore, the meat like the chickens, beefs, porks can replace by the plant and vegetable. It provides sufficient nutrients for our body and can also help us prevent from a substantial number of problems such as the high blood pressure, cardiovascular and really good for our eyes. For example, carrot contains a lot of vitamin A and can prevent people from myopia.
On the other hand, animal testing has played an essential role in the medical fields. With the development of technology, we can replace animal experiment with the computer programs that could provide a significant number of results. However, finished drug must be inspected by testing animals like hamsters before giving to patients for safety. For instance, animal testing has so far saved many patients the virus diseases by finding suitable vaccines.
To sum up, people should stop experimenting on the animal and find some other new medicals by technology.
Nowadays, there is a significant number of products made from
animals
like food or clothes can
be replaced
by other modern way. Although I
agree
with this trend, I
also
argue that we
still
need
animal
products to
some
extent.
On the one hand, it is
morally
wrong
to cause
animals
to suffer. To
begin
with,
animals
are
used
to be the major sources of materials to produce the outfit, until
now
some
wealthy
people
in
many
developed countries
still
use
skin of
animals
for making their clothes.
However
, this is the modern century,
so
there are
a huge of
materials can replace the
animals’
skin.
Furthermore
, the meat like the chickens, beefs,
porks can
replace by the plant and vegetable. It provides sufficient nutrients for our body and can
also
help
us
prevent
from a substantial number of problems such as the high blood pressure, cardiovascular and
really
good
for our eyes.
For example
, carrot contains
a lot of
vitamin A and can
prevent
people
from myopia.
On the other hand
,
animal
testing has played an essential role in the medical fields. With the development of technology, we can replace
animal
experiment with the computer programs that could provide a significant number of results.
However
, finished drug
must
be inspected
by testing
animals
like hamsters
before
giving to patients for safety.
For instance
,
animal
testing has
so
far saved
many
patients the virus diseases by finding suitable vaccines.
To sum up,
people
should
stop
experimenting on the
animal
and find
some
other new medicals by technology.
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