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Currently, there is a trend toward alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst, they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement? v.1

Currently, there is a trend toward alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst, they may be dangerous. v. 1
Many people believe in using alternative medicines to treat their illnesses. Traditional forms of remedy have been around for centuries and include the uses of herbs, elements, oils and even energy transference. It is vital to assess the utility of such treatments in a modern world of medication for the benefits of patients. Although some individuals asserting that alternative medicine is a negative, this is completely inaccurate because different medicine is extremely inexpensive and effective intervention for most ailments. Firstly, many forms of alternative medicines are quite affordable for the general public and can be easily accessed. In many cases, traditional remedies can be bought for just a few dollars, or even produced in a person's garden, as where modern pharmaceuticals may cost ten times as much to cure the same illness. For example, antibiotics used to treat a bacterial infection can cost a hundred dollars for a few pills, however, natural antibiotics like parsley and garlic costs just a few cents. Not only cost-efficiency is one benefit of using natural medication, as well as, they are truly effective. Furthermore, natural medicines often target the root of medical problems, as opposed to just the symptoms, and have positive long-lasting results. The use of many ancient therapies and herbs is concerned with strengthening the human body, specifically the afflicted individual's immune system, rather than just attacking the pathogens which cause the sickness. The same garlic and parsley used to treat a bacterial infection, not only helps to cleanse the body, but also boosts the immunity, so that the person's natural defences can restore health. In conclusion, the notion that traditional medicines can invaluable is completely absurd, as they are often less expensive and more effective. Therefore, different medication is an absolutely worthwhile approach to healing. In the end, it is foolish to think that our ancestors did not know what they were doing.
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people
believe in using alternative medicines to treat their illnesses. Traditional forms of remedy have been around for centuries and include the
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uses
of herbs, elements, oils and even energy transference. It is vital to assess the utility of such treatments in a modern world of medication for the benefits of patients. Although
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some
individuals asserting that alternative
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medicine
is a
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negative
, this is completely inaccurate
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because
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different
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medicine
is
extremely
inexpensive and effective intervention for most ailments.

Firstly
,
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many
forms of alternative medicines are quite affordable for the
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general public
and can be
easily
accessed. In
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many
cases, traditional remedies can be
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bought
for
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just
a few dollars, or even produced in a person's garden, as where modern pharmaceuticals may cost ten times as much to cure the same illness.
For example
, antibiotics
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used
to treat a bacterial infection can cost a hundred dollars for a few pills,
however
,
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natural
antibiotics like parsley and garlic costs
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just
a few cents. Not
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only
cost-efficiency is one benefit of using
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natural
medication,
as well
as, they are
truly
effective.

Furthermore
,
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natural
medicines
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often
target the root of medical problems, as opposed to
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just
the symptoms, and have
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positive
long-lasting results. The
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use
of
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many
ancient therapies and herbs
is concerned
with strengthening the human body,
specifically
the afflicted individual's immune system,
rather
than
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just
attacking the pathogens which cause the sickness. The same garlic and parsley
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used
to treat a bacterial infection, not
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only
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helps
to cleanse the body,
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but
also
boosts the immunity,
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so
that the person's
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natural
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defences
can restore health.

In conclusion
, the notion that traditional medicines can invaluable is completely absurd, as they are
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often
less expensive and more effective.
Therefore
,
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different
medication is an
absolutely
worthwhile approach to healing. In the
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end
, it is foolish to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that our ancestors did not know what they were doing.
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IELTS essay Currently, there is a trend toward alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst, they may be dangerous. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
312 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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