All around the world, animal products are used for food, clothes and also for medicine. Because of the development of human society and values, I believe that we should try to limit the use of animals for our own purpose.
Firstly, many studies shows that plant-based diets not only provide enough nutrients for our bodies to function normally, but also help us prevent health problems such as diabetes, high blood pressure or heart attacks. Meat has a lot of nutrients, but we can still replace it with plants. There are sufficient vegetable-based products such as pulse and soya milk that are rich in protein.
Secondly, I think that sacrificing an animal’s life for a jacket or a dress is extremely cruel. Nowadays, clothes made of artificial materials are warmer, softer than the natural materials and less initial cost and maintenance cost. So, no longer need to exploit animals for manufacturing clothes.
Finally, with the development of artificial chemicals we can replace animal experimentations with sophisticated computer programs that could provide more accurate results. For instance, computer-based testing has been used for the test the safety of new drugs or cancer treatments and has proved effective. Therefore, no longer necessary to use animals for new medicine testing or treatments.
In conclusion, I believe that we should always try to limit the suffering of all creatures and aim for a world where we do not use animal products. It would be better for the environment and for ourselves.
All around the world,
animal
products are
used
for food, clothes and
also
for medicine.
Because
of the development of human society and values, I believe that we should try to limit the
use
of
animals
for our
own
purpose.
Firstly
,
many
studies
shows
that plant-based diets not
only
provide
enough
nutrients for our bodies to function
normally
,
but
also
help
us
prevent
health problems such as diabetes, high blood pressure or heart attacks. Meat has
a lot of
nutrients,
but
we can
still
replace it with plants. There are sufficient vegetable-based products such as pulse and
soya
milk that are rich in protein.
Secondly
, I
think
that sacrificing an
animal’s
life for a jacket or a dress is
extremely
cruel. Nowadays, clothes made of artificial materials are warmer, softer than the natural materials and less initial cost and maintenance cost.
So
, no longer need to exploit
animals
for manufacturing clothes.
Finally
, with the development of artificial chemicals we can replace
animal
experimentations
with sophisticated computer programs that could provide more accurate results.
For instance
, computer-based testing has been
used
for the
test
the safety of new drugs or cancer treatments and has proved effective.
Therefore
, no longer necessary to
use
animals
for new medicine testing or treatments.
In conclusion
, I believe that we should always try to limit the suffering of all creatures and aim for a world where we do not
use
animal
products. It would be better for the environment and for ourselves.
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