In the contemporary era, most of commodities has been produced by big companies and, people get lots of benefits of it. While, our quality of life has changing due to big companies like Tata, automobiles and so on. I am totally agree with the statement and shall explain the same in the upcoming paragraphs.
Admittedly, people depend more on gadgets then they ever had before. It is ofcourse a serious concer. Because modern man do not understand the fact that multinational companies is a threat to their lives. Moreover, people forget about their own ability as they all rely on companies for the basic purposes. For instance, in Canada before starting of twenty first century usage of gadgets had been banned and people had to work for their purposes.
Moving Futher, there is great concern about our health because most of the people rely on their products despite thinking about the effect of their products. The best epitome of this could be a survey conducted by Delhi government claimed that uptill 2025 almost every single person in India will rely on multinational nationals products and these will lead to many causes related to health and environment.
To conclude, despite of being a big threat to mankind products of big companies is currently used by many people which changes the lives of the people but, instead of too much reliability on machine products a person should not forget about the of their own brain.
In the contemporary era,
most of commodities
has
been produced
by
big
companies
and,
people
get
lots of benefits of it. While, our quality of life has changing due to
big
companies
like Tata, automobiles and
so
on. I am
totally
agree
with the statement and shall
explain
the same in the upcoming paragraphs.
Admittedly
,
people
depend more on gadgets
then
they ever had
before
. It is
ofcourse
a serious
concer
.
Because
modern
man
do not understand the fact that multinational
companies
is a threat to their
lives
.
Moreover
,
people
forget about their
own
ability as they all rely on
companies
for the basic purposes.
For instance
, in Canada
before
starting of twenty
first
century usage of gadgets had
been banned
and
people
had to work for their purposes.
Moving
Futher
, there is great concern about our health
because
most of the
people
rely on their
products
despite thinking about the effect of their
products
. The best epitome of this could be a survey conducted by Delhi
government
claimed that
uptill
2025 almost every single person in India will rely on multinational nationals
products
and these will lead to
many
causes related to health and environment.
To conclude
,
despite of
being a
big
threat to mankind
products
of
big
companies
is
currently
used
by
many
people
which
changes
the
lives
of the
people
but
,
instead
of too much reliability on machine
products
a person should not forget about the of their
own
brain.
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