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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home? v.18

In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home? v. 18
There is the largest number of people who are lending houses instead of buying them in a few countries. This essay will discuss lease homes make people easy in managing their accommodations as the major advantages, whereas we can' t assure secured living without our own homes as the main disadvantage. Though every individual wishes to buy their own house, because of their busy schedule they even cannot maintain them well. So, for the result, they feel comfortable to live in apartments or borrow some houses. if we have own house then we should maintain all of the stuff yourself that may be time-consuming, and hard for some people who have to move long distance to work. For example, working the whole day for an office and still have to manage home schedules than it really makes people bored. To live under other management is easy then to manage all ourselves. Everyone wishes to live with security, also they want to have their home as one of the secured places. So, living in different types of accommodations than home may not provide such safety to live. People have different types of lifestyles, and their comfort depends upon the method of living they choose. Living in own house let you to-do make your choices but if you are staying in apartments or some leased house, you must take permissions to carry your activity. Though if you can' t obey such rules and regulations that you don' t have a choice rather than moving next place. In conclusion, even lots of people are choosing the leased house as their major accommodation due to easy management of all household task. On the other hand, Living in a leased house is unsecured, people have to move different places also have to get permissions to carry parties.
There is the largest number of
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people
who are lending
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houses
instead
of buying them in a few countries. This essay will discuss lease
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homes
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make
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people
easy in managing their accommodations as the major advantages, whereas we
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can&
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living
without our
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own
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homes
as the main disadvantage.

Though every individual wishes to
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buy
their
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own
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house
,
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because
of their busy schedule they even cannot maintain them well.
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So
, for the result, they feel comfortable to
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live
in apartments or borrow
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some
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houses
.
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if
we have
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own
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house
then we should maintain
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all of the
stuff yourself that may be time-consuming, and
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hard
for
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some
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people
who
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move
long distance to work.
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still
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have to
manage home schedules than it
really
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makes
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people
bored. To
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live
under other management is easy then to manage all ourselves.

Everyone wishes to
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live
with security,
also
they want to have their home as one of the secured places.
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So
,
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living
in
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different
types of accommodations than home may not provide such safety to
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live
.
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People
have
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different
types of lifestyles, and their comfort depends upon the method of
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living
they choose.
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in
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own
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house
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let
you to-do
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make
your choices
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but
if you are staying in apartments or
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some
leased
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house
, you
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must
take permissions to carry your activity. Though if you
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rules
and regulations that you
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don&
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rather
than moving
next
place.

In conclusion
, even lots of
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people
are choosing the leased
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house
as their major accommodation due to easy management of all household task.
On the other hand
,
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Living
in a leased
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house
is unsecured
,
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people
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have


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to
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move
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different
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have to
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get
permissions to carry parties.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home? v. 18

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
302 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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