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In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting. v.2

In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting. v. 2
Renting a house is becoming more popular than owning one. A few individuals opine that it is better to rent a house; however, others say that one should invest to buy their own home. This essay will demonstrate how it can be advantageous to rent a house and what problems one might face. The first and foremost advantage is location preference. For a middle-class person, it is not possible to buy a home amidst city, thereby they can easily rent it without worrying about their budget. Not only it is easy for them to commute to their workplaces but also it can save their precious time, which might have been wasted in traffic, instead. In addition to this, they are not accounted for maintenance that they might have been doing while staying in their own house and they are flooded with various options if they need to relocate either because of lack of amenities or their office is shifted somewhere else. To cite an instance, it has been widely seen that if people switch their jobs, they rent a new accommodation. It is irrefutable to say that having their own home is everyone's dream. People do feel uneasy in rented homes due to various reasons such as denial of the landlord to provide a PAN card for tax rebate, fixing varoius renovations related problems and paying the payment online. Owners, nowadays, are taking advantage of it and not listening to the any requests made by tenants. As per the survey conducted by 'The Times of India' in December 2018, 7 out of 10 people are struggling to get income tax rebate on account of their rented property as landlords are not providing them with PAN number. To conclude, renting a house is a favorable option if one wants to avoid traffic while driving to their office, nonetheless the same can be a problem when it comes to managing their tax rebate and other expenses such as maintenance.
Renting a
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is becoming more popular than owning one. A few individuals opine that it is better to
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rent
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house
;
however
, others say that one should invest to
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buy
their
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own
home. This essay will demonstrate how it can be advantageous to
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rent
a
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house
and what problems one might face.

The
first
and foremost advantage is location preference. For a middle-
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class
person, it is not possible to
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buy
a home amidst city, thereby they can
easily
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rent
it without worrying about their budget. Not
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only
it is easy for them to commute to their workplaces
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but
also
it can save their precious time, which might have
been wasted
in traffic,
instead
.
In addition
to this, they are not accounted for maintenance that they might have been doing while staying in their
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own
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house and
they
are flooded
with various options if they need to relocate either
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because
of lack of amenities or their office
is shifted
somewhere else. To cite an instance, it has been
widely
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seen
that if
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people
switch their jobs, they
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rent
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a new accommodation
.

It is irrefutable to say that having their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
home is everyone's dream.
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People
do feel uneasy in rented
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homes
due to various reasons such as denial of the landlord to provide a PAN card for tax rebate, fixing
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varoius
renovations related problems and paying the payment online. Owners, nowadays, are taking advantage of it and not listening to the any requests made by tenants. As per the survey conducted by 'The Times of India' in December 2018, 7 out of 10
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are struggling to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
income tax rebate on account of their rented property as landlords are not providing them with PAN number.

To conclude
, renting a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
is a favorable option if one wants to avoid traffic while driving to their office, nonetheless the same can be a problem when it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
to managing their tax rebate and other expenses such as maintenance.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
327 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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