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In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.8

In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? v. 8
A great amount of garbage is being produced by population in the current world. This reality can explain for a lack of awareness about the care of the planet and for the future generations. However, the authorities still are on time for decrease the rubbish in the Earth, perhaps a solution could be to create laws in order to enhance the environment. In my opinion, the increase of waste in the world is a consequence of selfish of human, due to people in general think about themselves. Actually, only a little group of persons is worried about whether a can of tuna will be eliminated totally for the land in 5000 years more. Also, nowadays companies create their merchandise with unnecessary plastic. For example, when we go to the supermarket, we can find many commodities that don’t need to be wrapped with nylon or paperboard. However, in the last years, Chilean government, for instead, have done something for encouraging recycling, reducing and reusing. One of these actions was the elimination of plastic bags in retail stores, so the Chileans now is using their own cloth bags. But I think the authorities have to do more actions since we have a planet more “Green”. For example, I believe the State should generate laws that force companies to ha a strong corporate social responsibility. In conclusion, is not a secret that we had produced several unnecessary junk, such a consequence of our unaware about this topic. Nevertheless, the government is doing some actions to help to reduce this trouble, but still there is quite work for doing, because having a better planet is a responsibility of everybody.
A great amount of garbage is
being produced
by population in the
current
world. This reality can
explain
for a lack of awareness about the care of the planet and for the future generations.
However
, the authorities
still
are on time for decrease the rubbish in the Earth, perhaps a solution could be to create laws in order to enhance the environment.

In my opinion, the increase of waste in the world is a consequence of selfish of human, due to
people
in general
think
about themselves. Actually,
only
a
little
group of persons
is worried
about whether a can of tuna will
be eliminated
totally
for the land in 5000 years more.
Also
, nowadays
companies
create their merchandise with unnecessary plastic.
For example
, when we go to the supermarket, we can find
many
commodities that don’t need to
be wrapped
with nylon or paperboard.

However
, in the last years, Chilean
government
, for
instead
, have done something for encouraging recycling, reducing and reusing. One of these actions was the elimination of plastic bags in retail stores,
so
the Chileans
now
is using their
own
cloth bags.
But
I
think
the authorities
have to
do more actions since we have a planet more “Green”.
For example
, I believe the State should generate laws that force
companies
to ha a strong corporate social responsibility.

In conclusion
, is not a secret that we had produced several unnecessary junk, such a consequence of our unaware about this topic.
Nevertheless
, the
government
is doing
some
actions to
help
to
reduce
this trouble,
but
still
there is quite work for doing,
because
having a better planet is a responsibility of everybody.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? v. 8

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.5
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