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In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development. This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the countryside. This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole. What are these problems? How might they be reduced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.1

Weather plays an important role in sustaining life and vegetation. While abnormalities in them can have huge impact on biosphere, however, some individuals think that getting aquinaintance with this change is better than bringing a solution to climatic instability. This essay will argue why hindering the uncommon patterns of atmospheric conditions are necessary. Comfortable weather patterns will surely help us to maintain healthy flora and fauna. This is rather important to balance the food cycle, but disturbing the climatic conditions will result an unstable atmosphere for them to co-exist. For instance, snowshoe hares has evolved to turn white so that they could blend in with the snow, but the disturbed weather is melting snow in some places before they could adapt. This exposure to snow-less landscape has resulted a decline in their polpulation. These uneven changes will surely affect the food and living habits of different animals and plants make then vulnarable to extinction. The hinderence to changes has its own limits, humans cannot have complete control over dynamics in the atmosphere and the technology what pocessed by them can help only to a certain extent. This loophole with mortals make them accept the changes in the pattern. For example, the melting of glaciers in antartica, no technology has ever helped to retain the lost ice sheets, rather the loss is being accepted. The power of the nature is still a mystery and some facts must be accepted and should live with it. This eassay argued that accepting the changes in climatic fluctuations are not always possible, but preventing some can ensure existence of some species for ever.
Weather plays an
important
role in sustaining life and vegetation. While abnormalities in them can have huge impact on biosphere,
however
,
some
individuals
think
that getting
aquinaintance
with this
change
is better than bringing a solution to climatic instability. This essay will argue why hindering the uncommon patterns of atmospheric conditions are necessary.

Comfortable weather patterns will
surely
help
us to maintain healthy flora and fauna. This is
rather
important
to balance the food cycle,
but
disturbing the climatic conditions will result an unstable atmosphere for them to co-exist.
For instance
, snowshoe hares has evolved to turn white
so
that they could blend in with the snow,
but
the disturbed weather is melting snow in
some
places
before
they could adapt. This exposure to snow-less landscape has resulted a decline in their
polpulation
. These uneven
changes
will
surely
affect the food and living habits of
different
animals and plants
make
then
vulnarable
to extinction.

The
hinderence
to
changes
has its
own
limits, humans cannot have complete control over dynamics in the atmosphere and the technology what
pocessed
by them can
help
only
to a certain extent. This loophole with mortals
make
them accept the
changes
in the pattern.
For example
, the melting of glaciers in
antartica
, no technology has ever
helped
to retain the lost ice sheets,
rather
the loss is being
accepted
. The power of the nature is
still
a mystery and
some
facts
must
be
accepted
and should
live
with it.

This
eassay
argued that accepting the
changes
in climatic fluctuations are not always possible,
but
preventing
some
can ensure existence of
some
species for ever.
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IELTS essay In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development. This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the countryside. This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole. What are these problems? How might they be reduced?

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4 paragraphs
268 words
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