A large number of countries are trying to preserve animals in the best way; however, many people argue, that is pointless to expend money, time and other resources for conserving wild animals and there is no place for wild animals. However, I disagree with this view and strongly suggest that we should try to save wild animals in every way possible.
Firstly, human for living their life need the ecologically balanced of earth; moreover, animals and plant are the member of the environment. nevertheless, humans stay at the top of the food chain, but it does not mean that animals are not vital for protecting habitats from extinction such as a forest. For example, trees that exist in forest produce oxygen and absorb carbon dioxide from atmosphere that contribute to moderate climate by this process; in addition, protect earth from global warming, so by preserve animals can keep the earth balance, so it is not reasonable people saying the earth does not exist place for protecting animals
Secondly, conserving animal is not wasting money and resources as a matter of fact that humans waste much money for fruitless point that are not useful for them unlike animals have a lot of benefits for people and natural habitats. For example, they spend much money and energy on producing drugs such as tobacco that are harmless to people and the environment by building factories and emit carbon dioxide and carbon monoxide to the atmosphere people increase the pace of destruction of natural habitats. Whereas, animals enhance ecologically balanced, even humans provide their food from animals and plants.
In conclusion, it is not acceptable that protect animals is wasting money and resources and for conversing them there is no place due to the fact that people need to animal for keeping their life and ecological balance in the earth.
A large number of
countries are trying to preserve
animals
in the best way;
however
,
many
people
argue,
that is
pointless to expend
money
, time and other resources for conserving wild
animals
and there is no place for wild
animals
.
However
, I disagree with this view and
strongly
suggest that we should try to save wild
animals
in every way possible.
Firstly
,
human
for living their life need the
ecologically
balanced of
earth
;
moreover
,
animals
and plant are the member of the environment.
nevertheless
,
humans
stay at the top of the food chain,
but
it does not mean that
animals
are not vital for protecting habitats from extinction such as a forest.
For example
, trees that exist in forest produce oxygen and absorb carbon dioxide from atmosphere that contribute to moderate climate by this process;
in addition
, protect
earth
from global warming,
so
by preserve
animals
can
keep
the
earth
balance,
so
it is not reasonable
people
saying the
earth
does not exist place for protecting
animals
Secondly
, conserving
animal
is not wasting
money
and resources as a matter of fact that
humans
waste much
money
for fruitless point that are not useful for them unlike
animals
have
a lot of
benefits for
people
and natural habitats.
For example
, they spend much
money
and energy on producing drugs such as tobacco that are harmless to
people
and the environment by building factories and emit carbon dioxide and carbon monoxide to the atmosphere
people
increase the pace of destruction of natural habitats. Whereas,
animals
enhance
ecologically
balanced, even
humans
provide their food from
animals
and plants.
In conclusion
, it is not acceptable that protect
animals
is wasting
money
and resources and for conversing them there is no place due to the fact that
people
need to
animal
for keeping their life and ecological balance in the
earth
.
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