Shopping malls have replaced local businesses in many parts of the world. Most people find it more convenient to but everything they need at one place. As a result, small shops no longer make enough money so they end up closing. I find this extremely negative for a number of reasons.
The first reason is that small shops are owned by locals who worked hard to build their businesses. So they are usually more inclined to keep higher standards of customer service so as not to lose their loyal customers. While malls usually have chain shops which are more oriented towards marketing and not towards the actual benefits or needs of the community. For instance, a local supermarket normally contains produce from local farms so it affects the economy of the town itself. In contrast, a hyper marker in a shopping center sells produce from farms that are not necessarily local or even national. Thus small businesses affect not only the lives of their owners and workers, but also the economical streams in the town.
Another reason is that domestics businesses, especially those which have been owned by successive generations, become a part of the town' s culture and heritage. For example, every town has its own authentic restaurants and cafes which serve their unique food and drinks. Tourists are more attracted to eat at said places as opposed to dining at the food court of the shopping center. Furthermore, clothing shops at small towns usually employ young designers who start their careers domestically. The closing of these clothing shops makes it extremely challenging for the majority of those designers who might struggle to get a job in large apparel companies which open at shopping malls.
In conclusion, shopping centers have taken the place of domestic shops in many towns. Unfortunately, such development has some drawbacks which affect the economy, job market and livelihood of local residents.
Shopping
malls have replaced
local
businesses
in
many
parts of the world. Most
people
find it more convenient to
but
everything they need at one place.
As a result
,
small
shops
no longer
make
enough
money
so
they
end
up closing. I find this
extremely
negative
for a number of reasons.
The
first
reason is that
small
shops
are
owned
by
locals
who worked
hard
to build their
businesses
.
So
they are
usually
more inclined to
keep
higher standards of customer service
so
as not to lose their loyal customers. While malls
usually
have chain
shops
which are more oriented towards marketing and not towards the actual benefits or needs of the community.
For instance
, a
local
supermarket
normally
contains produce from
local
farms
so
it affects the economy of the
town
itself.
In contrast
, a hyper marker in a
shopping
center sells produce from farms that are not
necessarily
local
or even national.
Thus
small
businesses
affect not
only
the
lives
of their owners and workers,
but
also
the economical streams in the town.
Another reason is that domestics
businesses
,
especially
those which have been
owned
by successive generations, become a part of the
town&
#039; s culture and heritage.
For example
, every
town
has its
own
authentic restaurants and
cafes
which serve their unique food and drinks. Tourists are more attracted to eat at said places as opposed to dining at the food court of the
shopping
center.
Furthermore
, clothing
shops
at
small
towns
usually
employ young designers who
start
their careers
domestically
. The closing of these clothing
shops
makes
it
extremely
challenging for the majority of those designers who might struggle to
get
a job in large apparel
companies
which open at
shopping
malls.
In conclusion
,
shopping
centers have taken the place of domestic
shops
in
many
towns
. Unfortunately, such development has
some
drawbacks which affect the economy, job market and livelihood of
local
residents.
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