It is true that fees for higher education is expensive and not affordable for everyone. So according to some university should be free for all people regardless of their background. In my opinion, I agree that university education ought to be free for everyone as it will greatly benefit both individuals and society.
A good reason to abolish the university fee is that it gives people whether they are rich or poor equal rights. At present, students from a poor background are prevented from entering the university because they are unable to pay the bills. This excludes a large proportion of society and is discriminatory which can be avoided by getting rid of tuition fee.
Another point to consider is that having no fees at university means that students will no longer have to work at the same time as studying to pay the tuition costs. For instance, around three quarters of all students in the UK must work either full time or part time to pay their fees. Free higher education should, therefore, produce better results as students will be able to get immersed in their studies exclusively.
Finally, free university education will benefit the society in the long run. It will open up higher education to a wider section of the population. This will result in increasing the number of educated people. In other words, having a great resource of skilled and knowledgeable professionals will bring greater rewards to society as a whole. Moreover, it can bring more economic advantages to a country that shows itself to be prosperous and leading in various fields.
In conclusion, free university education is a must for every country that values equal rights and that wishes to advance. The cost of free education will recouped many times over by the benefit it brings.
It is true that
fees
for higher
education
is expensive and not affordable for everyone.
So
according to
some
university
should be
free
for all
people
regardless of their background. In my opinion, I
agree
that
university
education
ought to be
free
for everyone as it will
greatly
benefit both individuals and society.
A
good
reason to abolish the
university
fee
is that it gives
people
whether they are rich or poor equal rights. At present,
students
from a poor background are
prevented
from entering the
university
because
they are unable to pay the bills. This excludes a large proportion of society and is discriminatory which can
be avoided
by getting rid of tuition fee.
Another point to consider is that having no
fees
at
university
means that
students
will no longer
have to
work at the same
time
as studying to pay the tuition costs.
For instance
, around three quarters of all
students
in the UK
must
work either full
time
or part
time
to pay their
fees
.
Free
higher
education
should,
therefore
, produce better results as
students
will be able to
get
immersed in their studies exclusively.
Finally
,
free
university
education
will benefit the society in the long run. It will open up higher
education
to a wider section of the population. This will result in increasing the number of educated
people
.
In other words
, having a great resource of skilled and knowledgeable professionals will bring greater rewards to society as a whole.
Moreover
, it can bring more economic advantages to a country that
shows
itself to be prosperous and leading in various fields.
In conclusion
,
free
university
education
is a
must
for every country that values equal rights and that wishes to advance. The cost of
free
education
will
recouped
many
times
over by the benefit it brings.
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