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In order to study at university, students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them, so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree v.6

In order to study at university, students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them, so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. v. 6
Education is an essential ingredient in order to succeed in life. However, owing to the exorbitant fees being charged, getting enrolled in a university is not affordable for every student. Some people have the opinion that in order to provide access to quality education for everyone, universities should not charge tuition fees. I firmly agree with the said viewpoint as I believe that providing free education will bring various social and economic benefits, which will be illustrated in this essay. Firstly, the major advantage of having free education for everyone will be that more people particularly those who belong to a financially challenged background will be given an opportunity to get higher education. It is no secret that many students despite their ability and urge to get higher education could not get enrolled in universities due to unreasonably high tuition fees, which they are unable to afford. This coerces them to work in the informal sector where often they are paid low wages, which affects the quality of living. By providing free university education, underprivileged and marginalized segments of society will be encouraged to pursue their higher studies. What is more, it is a well-known fact that developed countries often lay emphasis on free education for their citizens as this will help improve the economy of their countries. In other words, having a majority of educated and skilled people will give rise to productivity and creativity, which will draw foreign investments. Hence, more employment opportunities will be generated for individuals. Another advantage -when there will be no requirement of tuition fees to be paid- is that the factor of inequality and disparity will greatly decrease. People regardless of their financial status or background will have access to equal facilities in terms of education. In conclusion, the idea of providing free university education to everyone is born of positive intent and could bring in its wake various benefits, which would help reduce factors such as disparity and provide equal learning opportunities to everyone.
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Education
is an essential ingredient in order to succeed in life.
However
, owing to the exorbitant
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fees
being charged
, getting enrolled in a
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university
is not affordable for every student.
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Some
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people
have the opinion that in order to provide access to quality
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education
for
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everyone
,
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universities
should not charge tuition
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fees
. I
firmly
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agree
with the said viewpoint as I believe that providing
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free
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education
will bring various social and economic benefits, which will
be illustrated
in this essay.

Firstly
, the major advantage of having
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free
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education
for
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everyone
will be that more
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people
particularly
those who belong to a
financially
challenged background will be
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given
an opportunity to
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get
higher
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education
. It is no secret that
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many
students despite their ability and urge to
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get
higher
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education
could not
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get
enrolled in
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universities
due to
unreasonably
high tuition
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fees
, which they are unable to afford. This coerces them to work in the informal sector where
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often
they
are paid
low wages, which affects the quality of living. By providing
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free
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university
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education
, underprivileged and marginalized segments of society will
be encouraged
to pursue their higher studies.

What is more
,
it is a well-known fact that
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developed countries
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often
lay emphasis on
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free
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education
for their citizens as this will
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help
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improve
the economy of their countries.
In other words
, having a majority of educated and skilled
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people
will give rise to productivity and creativity, which will draw foreign investments.
Hence
, more employment opportunities will
be generated
for individuals. Another advantage -when there will be no requirement of tuition
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fees
to
be paid
- is that the factor of inequality and disparity will
greatly
decrease.
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People
regardless of their financial status or background will have access to equal facilities in terms of education.

In conclusion
, the
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idea
of providing
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free
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university
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education
to
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everyone
is born
of
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positive
intent and could bring in its wake various benefits, which would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
factors such as disparity and provide equal learning opportunities to
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everyone
.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
31Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay In order to study at university, students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them, so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
332 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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