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In order to solve traffic problem, governments should tax private car owner heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. what are advantages and disadvantages of such solution? v.1

In order to solve traffic problem, governments should tax private car owner heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. what are advantages and disadvantages of such solution? v. 1
Traffic handling have become prominent issue in several cities. To mollify these issue, one of the solution is charging high taxes on private cars and use that money in improvising public transportation facilities. This essay will highlight that this is certainly advantageous despite a few inevitable drawbacks. Increasing taxes on private cars will certainly mitigate the usage to personal vehicles. Firstly, this would result in pollution reduction which helps in creating balanced environment. An additional point is, middle classed categorized people will think twice before using their own vehicles and will opt to use public transportation. As per statistics of Washington Post, approximately 3 billion people belong to middle class. Hence, there can be much advancement in usage of public transport and elevate government budgets for public transportation. However, it might be more disadvantageous for the people whose solely way of income is gained by occupation of driving. Majority of the drivers will face difficulty in paying these high tax. As, their annual income drops down, their survival becomes complex. Apart from it, raising the taxes on private cars could affect the company of the car, because individuals would refrain from buying budget cars. If these policy needs to be implemented then one of the solution is to raise taxes but to a certain limit. This might be more efficient solution and an equilibrium is created in public and government by introducing these scheme. To sum up, charging high taxes would not be good option but, as mentioned that charging taxes to thin and static value can help to both government and people.
Traffic handling have become prominent issue in several cities. To mollify these issue, one of the solution is charging high
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taxes
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on


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private
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cars
and
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use
that money in improvising
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public
transportation facilities. This essay will highlight that this is
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certainly


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advantageous
despite a few inevitable drawbacks.

Increasing
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taxes
on private
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cars
will
certainly
mitigate the usage to personal vehicles.
Firstly
, this would result in pollution

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reduction
which
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helps
in creating balanced environment. An additional point is, middle classed categorized
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people
will
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think
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twice


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before
using their
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own
vehicles and will opt to
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use
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public
transportation. As per statistics of Washington Post,
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approximately


3 billion
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people
belong to middle
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class
.
Hence
, there can be much advancement in usage of
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public
transport and elevate
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government


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budgets
for
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public
transportation.

However
, it might be more disadvantageous for the
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people
whose
solely
way of income
is gained
by occupation of driving. Majority
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of


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the
drivers will face difficulty in paying these high
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tax
. As, their annual income
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drops down
, their survival becomes complex. Apart

from it, raising the
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taxes
on private
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cars
could affect the
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company
of the
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car
,
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because
individuals would refrain from buying budget

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cars
. If these policy needs to
be implemented
then one of the solution is to raise
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taxes
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but
to a certain limit. This might be
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more


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efficient
solution and an equilibrium
is created
in
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public
and
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government
by introducing these scheme.

To sum up, charging high
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taxes
would not be
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good
option
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but
, as mentioned that charging
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taxes
to thin and static value can
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help
to

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both
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government
and
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people
.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Mistakes

IELTS essay In order to solve traffic problem, governments should tax private car owner heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. what are advantages and disadvantages of such solution? v. 1

Essay
  American English
15 paragraphs
263 words
5.5
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