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In most countries, prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime. Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide education for those who violate the law. To what extend do you agree or disagree? v.2

In most countries, prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime. Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide education for those who violate the law. v. 2
There is a new ideology that has recently emerged that all countries should consider using one global language. Some pundits think that would be beneficial for the nations, whereas others of an otherwise belief. This essay will elaborate on the benefits and the drawbacks to this trend. Perhaps one of the main advantages of this phenomenon would strengthen the relationships and conglomeration of various forces, economies, and other trades. For example, the United States of America, the United Kingdom, Canada, and Australia are collaborating together in various sectors and English is the formal language that bonding them. Secondly, utilizing the same expression would not only yield the same sets of values, but also the cultural differences would dwindle. Thus, if nations have united verbal communication, they would carry out a better connection. Conversely, the domination of one language means the extinction of other words with their customs and traditions. For instance, the Hieroglyphic is a prime example of extinct languages which did not pass down to the descendants of the pharaohs along with their secrets as a result of the hegemony of other civilizations. Moreover, this might cause other cultures to go into oblivion as the universal language conveys other different concepts for interpersonal interactions. Therefore, if these varied regions utilized one type of verbal connection, their other spoken or written form of communication would vanish. In conclusion, having a unified global language is not far fetched inevitably and has been seen across some countries that want to grow stronger. However, if all nations communicate with only one language, negligence may occur in different indigenous cultures.
There is a new ideology that has recently emerged that all countries should consider using one global
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language
.
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Some
pundits
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think
that would be beneficial for the nations, whereas others of an
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otherwise belief
. This essay will elaborate on the benefits and the drawbacks to this trend.

Perhaps one of the main advantages of this phenomenon would strengthen the relationships and conglomeration of various forces, economies, and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
trades.
For example
, the United States of America, the United Kingdom, Canada, and Australia are collaborating together in various sectors and English is the formal
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language
that bonding them.
Secondly
, utilizing the same expression would not
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only
yield the same sets of values,
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but
also
the cultural differences would dwindle.
Thus
, if nations have united verbal communication, they would carry out a better connection.

Conversely
, the domination of one
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
means the extinction of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
words with their customs and traditions.
For instance
, the Hieroglyphic is a prime example of extinct
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languages
which did not pass down to the descendants of the pharaohs along with their secrets
as a result
of the hegemony of
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other
civilizations.
Moreover
, this might cause
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other
cultures to go into oblivion as the universal
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language
conveys
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other
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
concepts for interpersonal interactions.
Therefore
, if these varied regions utilized one type of verbal connection, their
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other
spoken or written form of communication would vanish.

In conclusion
, having a unified global
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language
is not
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far fetched
inevitably
and has been
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seen
across
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some
countries that want to grow stronger.
However
, if all nations communicate with
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only
one
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language
, negligence may occur in
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different
indigenous cultures.
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A man who knows two languages is worth two men.
French Proverb

IELTS essay In most countries, prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime. Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide education for those who violate the law. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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