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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. v.31

In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this? v. 31
With the growing population and increasing population density the availability of space to build new houses is a major concern these days, with the only option left for construction of new homes being the countryside. But some people believe it is more important to protect the it and avoid building new houses there. I agree with this opinion and the following essay will outline the reasons for my belief. There are numerous reasons for my opinion, the first and foremost being the pressure, that the development of infrastructure will put on the biotic and abiotic factors of the village environment. Countrysides have great diversity of plants and animal life, which are not only beautiful, but each one of them has a vital role in their respective ecosystem. With the construction of houses the vegetation will have to be cleared off and the animals will lose their habitat, thus leading to greater environmental loss. Furthermore, with the development of homes in remote areas, the population in these areas would also increase which would result in pollution as an outcome of day to day human activities. This would greatly compromise on the quality of living off all life forms of countryside and also disrupt its scenic beauty. Thus damaging a beautiful environment. At the end, I would like to conclude that development of homes in rural areas has enormous adverse effects on its environment and to protect the same, construction of homes should be avoided there. Instead some innovative solutions should be employed to solve the problem of space crunch.
With the growing population and increasing population density the availability of space to build new
houses
is a major concern these days, with the
only
option
left
for construction of new
homes
being the countryside.
But
some
people
believe it is more
important
to protect
the it
and avoid building new
houses
there. I
agree
with this opinion and the following essay will outline the reasons for my belief.

There are numerous reasons for my opinion, the
first
and foremost being the pressure, that the development of infrastructure will put on the biotic and abiotic factors of the village environment. Countrysides have great diversity of plants and animal life, which are not
only
beautiful
,
but
each one of them has a vital role in their respective ecosystem. With the construction of
houses
the vegetation will
have to
be cleared
off and the animals will lose their habitat,
thus
leading to greater environmental loss.

Furthermore
, with the development of
homes
in remote areas, the population in these areas would
also
increase which would result in pollution as an outcome of day to day human activities. This would
greatly
compromise on the quality of living off all life forms of countryside and
also
disrupt its scenic beauty.
Thus
damaging a
beautiful
environment.

At the
end
, I would like
to conclude
that development of
homes
in rural areas has enormous adverse effects on its environment and to protect the same, construction of
homes
should
be avoided
there.
Instead
some
innovative solutions should
be employed
to solve the problem of space crunch.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this? v. 31

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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