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In Many Countries,Weddings are getting bigger & more expensive than in the past. Is this positive & negative development??

In many countries, weddings are getting bigger and more expensive than the past. Is this a positive or negative development? v. 4

This is a negative trend for any poor country rather than the rich country like Europe. The family member of groom & bride facing lot of difficulties to maintain the wedding cost. Currently the weeding programme set in a convention centre with modern facility like Catering service, buffet dinner, Cultural programme. on the other hand maintaining different dress code in different session e. g: Holud, reception. Earlier the wedding programme was maximum 1/2 days whereas currently it looks almost 6/7 days & their need more time & money to arrange the wedding party. Yes its a memorable moments for everyone & people want to celebrate with a luxurious way. but to arrange such kinds of programme people need to pay lot of money. but all people can’t effort to such kinds of luxurious party. on the other hand there is a big cost for shopping for dress code & ornaments. Parallay there is some good benefits of this luxurious wedding that create job opertuneties for webplanner, Cattering service etc who involved to arrange such party. In the conclusion we can say that its a negative development of society to expense lot of money with luxurious wedding party.

This is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 trend for any poor country rather
 than the rich country like Europe. The family member of groom & bride facing It seems that an article is missing.a lot of
lot of
 difficulties to maintain the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmarriage
wedding
 cost.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Currently,
Currently
 the weeding Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.program
programme
 set in a convention Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 with modern facility like Catering service, buffet dinner, Cultural Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.program
programme
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOn
on
 the other hand maintaining This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 dress code in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 session e. g: Possible spelling mistake found.HoldHoled
Holud
, reception.

Earlier the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmarriage
wedding
Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.program
programme
 was maximum 1/2 days whereas currently
 it looks almost 6/7 days & their need more time & money to arrange the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmarriage
wedding
 party.

Yes Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?it'sit is
its
 a memorable Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "moment"?moment
moments
 for everyone & This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 want to celebrate with a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withostentatiousstatelyposhsumptuouspalatialgorgeous
luxurious
 way. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBut
but
 to arrange such kinds of Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.program
programme
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 need to pay lot of money. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBut
but
 all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can’t effort to such kinds of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withostentatiousstatelyposhsumptuouspalatialgorgeous
luxurious
 party. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOn
on
 the other hand there is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 cost for shopping for dress code & ornaments.

Possible spelling mistake found.ParallaxPar allay
Parallay
 there is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 benefits of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withostentatiousstatelyposhsumptuouspalatialgorgeous
luxurious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmarriage
wedding
 that create job Possible spelling mistake found.opportunities
opertuneties
 for Possible spelling mistake found.web planner
webplanner
, Possible spelling mistake found.CateringScatteringBatteringChatteringClatteringCantering
Cattering
 service etc who involved to arrange such party.

In the conclusion we can say that Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?it'sit is
its
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 development of society to expense It seems that an article is missing.a lot of
lot of
 money with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withostentatiousstatelyposhsumptuouspalatialgorgeous
luxurious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmarriage
wedding
 party. 