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Some people think that it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Others believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with you. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.2

Some people think that it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Others believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with you. v. 2
Choosing a friend and maintaining that friendship is crucial for staying mentally healthy. Some believe that friends should accord with them on every single topic while others view disagreement as beneficial and even constructive in certain situations. In this essay, I will discuss both opinions and give my own opinion. To start with, opinions form characters and similar beliefs signify same characters. One of the advantages of having a friend with similar / same beliefs is that you can share hobbies and maintain your amity without fretting over quarrels and their grave repercussions. For instance, friends who agree that gambling in a poker game is ethically unproblematic can spend long hours together getting pleasure from the game without having to worry about the pangs of conscience. If these two friends had different stances towards poker, they would not be able to enjoy the game together. However, discord in friendship is essential for vital decisions in your life. Disagreement can shed light on those aspects of life you are unaware of and this can lead to success. For instance, while pondering over immigrating to Canada a couple of years ago, I sought consultation from friends who disagreed with me on dozens of issues. Despite this, I found their suggestions about employment opportunities practical as they enlightened me about the issues I had neither foreseen on my own nor received from friends similar to me in character. Had I not listened to their differing opinions, I would not have been able to find a proper job in such a short time after landing in Canada. In conclusion, there are certainly benefits to having friends who share the same values and opinions as us; it is equally important to have friends who can offer a different perspective on things.
Choosing a
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and maintaining that friendship is crucial for staying mentally healthy.
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Some
believe that
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friends
should accord with them on every single topic while others view disagreement as beneficial and even constructive in certain situations. In this essay, I will discuss both
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opinions
and give my
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own
opinion.

To
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start
with,
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opinions
form characters and similar beliefs signify same characters. One of the advantages of having a
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friend
with similar / same beliefs is that you can share hobbies and maintain your amity without fretting over quarrels and their grave repercussions.
For instance
,
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friends
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who
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agree
that gambling in a poker game is
ethically
unproblematic can spend long hours together getting pleasure from the game without having to worry about the pangs of conscience. If these two
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friends
had
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different
stances towards poker, they would not be able to enjoy the game together.

However
, discord in friendship is essential for vital decisions in your life. Disagreement can shed light on those aspects of life you are unaware of and this can lead to success.
For instance
, while pondering over immigrating to Canada a couple of years ago, I sought consultation from
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friends
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
disagreed with me on dozens of issues. Despite this, I found their suggestions about employment opportunities practical as they enlightened me about the issues I had neither foreseen on my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
nor received from
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friends
similar to me in character. Had I not listened to their differing
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opinions
, I would not have been able to find a proper job in such a short time after landing in Canada.

In conclusion
, there are
certainly
benefits to having
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friends
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who
share the same values and
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opinions
as us; it is
equally
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important
to have
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friends
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who
can offer a
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different
perspective on things.
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17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people think that it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Others believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with you. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
296 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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