Nowadays, many societies are being influenced by throwaway cultures. In my perspective, what I believe that this on-going issue should be figured out as fast as possible.
The major cause of the trend is the busy lifestyle. People don’t have time to repair old pieces of stuff which have stopped working. Thus, they are much more accustomed to relying on new products in the market. Another reason is that of irresistible advertisements. Nowadays, advertisements highly impact on people's daily life. As a result, people tend to purchase new merchandise such as furniture, household goods on a regular period. Taking my personal experience as an example, I would like to switch my mobile phone each year since there is an updated smartphone which has been widely sold in the market.
It is true that the throwaway culture may cause negative effects on people’s lifestyle. Firstly, they may cultivate the wrong value about how to manage their money if they don’t restrict their daily costs. Besides, it may also waste a lot of natural resources once the customers continuously buy but won’t use them. Especially, for the wood products, thousands of trees are cut down to make household furniture and other pieces of stuff; many people dispose these products eventually even they haven’t used them once a time yet. There is no doubt that if we could not minimize then one day our resources might vanish out.
In conclusion, I believe it is necessary for government to implement new policies to reduce this toxic throwaway culture in each society.
Nowadays,
many
societies are
being influenced
by throwaway cultures. In my perspective, what I believe that this
on-going
issue should
be figured
out as
fast
as possible.
The major cause of the trend is the busy lifestyle.
People
don’t have time to repair
old
pieces of stuff which have
stopped
working.
Thus
, they are much more accustomed to relying on new products in the market. Another reason is that of irresistible advertisements. Nowadays, advertisements
highly
impact on
people
's daily life.
As a result
,
people
tend to
purchase
new merchandise such as furniture, household
goods
on a regular period. Taking my personal experience as an example, I would like to switch my mobile phone each year since there is an updated smartphone which has been
widely
sold in the market.
It is true that the throwaway culture may cause
negative
effects on
people’s
lifestyle.
Firstly
, they may cultivate the
wrong
value about how to manage their money if they don’t restrict their daily costs.
Besides
, it may
also
waste
a lot of
natural resources once the customers
continuously
buy
but
won’t
use
them.
Especially
, for the wood products, thousands of trees are
cut
down to
make
household furniture and other pieces of stuff;
many
people
dispose these products
eventually
even they haven’t
used
them once a time
yet
. There is no doubt that if we could not minimize then one day our resources might vanish out.
In conclusion
, I believe it is necessary for
government
to implement new policies to
reduce
this toxic throwaway culture in each society.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes