The popularity and income earning of celebrities have become a matter of discussion in recent times that some people believe they can earn more than politicians. This essay attempts to discuss the reasons behind this and then give a personal opinion on whether this is a good or bad development.
Firstly, there are wide ranges of reasons why celebrities can have higher salary than politicians. The first reason might not be unconnected to the booming of the entertainment industry. In many countries the industry is developing. For instance, the industry contributes significantly to Gross Domestic Products of many countries. The number two reason is the fact that their work is more rigorous, not to mention it requires more professional practice as well as innate talent and creativity than the work of politians. The evidence of this can be seen in the popular movie — Game of Thrones. Interviews with the actors and actresses revealed that they found the acting very challenging and strenuous.
On my personal note, I believe this is not a good development because it can make the politicians envious. For instance, it is not uncommon —especially in developing countries — to see politicians buying latest vehicles when they see eyes of the world (movie stars and musicians) doing the same.
In conclusion, the reasons why celebrities can earn higher than politicians is because of the development of the entertainment industry, and additionally, there work is often more difficult than that of political office holders. I also believe that this is not a welcoming development because it can lead to jeolosy by the politicians.
The popularity and income earning of celebrities have become a matter of discussion in recent times that
some
people
believe they can earn more than
politicians
. This essay attempts to discuss the
reasons
behind this and then give a personal opinion on whether this is a
good
or
bad
development.
Firstly
, there are wide ranges of
reasons
why celebrities can have higher salary than
politicians
. The
first
reason
might not
be unconnected
to the booming of the entertainment
industry
. In
many
countries the
industry
is developing.
For instance
, the
industry
contributes
significantly
to Gross Domestic Products of
many
countries. The number two
reason
is the fact that their work is more rigorous, not to mention it requires more professional practice
as well
as innate talent and creativity than the work of
politians
. The evidence of this can be
seen
in the popular movie — Game of Thrones. Interviews with the actors and actresses revealed that they found the acting
very
challenging and strenuous.
On my personal note, I believe this is not a
good
development
because
it can
make
the
politicians
envious.
For instance
, it is not uncommon —
especially
in
developing countries
— to
see
politicians
buying
latest
vehicles when they
see
eyes of the world (movie stars and musicians) doing the same.
In conclusion
, the
reasons
why celebrities can earn higher than
politicians
is
because
of the development of the entertainment
industry
, and
additionally
, there work is
often
more difficult than that of political office holders. I
also
believe that this is not a welcoming development
because
it can lead to
jeolosy
by the
politicians
.
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