As the world evolves, young people lose their old dialect and mother tongue that they don't care. I will consider both sides of the discussion in this essay.
On the one hand, opponents die of common languages the globalization have entered to health science. Due to, if they unearth more languages, they will be searching for health science news no matter where. The example of Inner Mongolia physicians defends their master's degree by electronically attending classes. Furthermore, in a globalized world, people eager to study foreign sound and exist abroad. So parents desire to study their pupils initiate at an early age. Such as, Chinese people feel if they know three foreign languages, they will be envisaged, intellectual persons.
However, those who support die of traditional languages promote keeping the old jargon, protects the nation from the peril of perishing. Evidence from other countries of Inner Mongolia. They still have been talking and writing to each other the mother tongue. Moreover, Countries are putting a lot of literature into school programs to preserve their expression. Due to, they instil to relish the native vocabulary. For instance, Cossack and Tyva republic have passed laws against retaining mother tongue.
To conclude, I would tend with support die of traditional 0speech. They can preserve their heritage and inculcate of adoration their native accent. 
As the world evolves, young  
people
 lose their  
old
 dialect and mother tongue that they don't care. I will consider both sides of the discussion in this essay.
On the one hand, opponents  
die
 of common  
languages
 the globalization have entered to health science. Due to, if they unearth more  
languages
, they will be searching for health science news no matter where. The example of Inner Mongolia physicians defends their master's degree by  
electronically
 attending classes.  
Furthermore
, in a globalized world,  
people
 eager to study foreign sound and exist abroad.  
So
 parents desire to study their pupils initiate at an early age. Such as, Chinese  
people
 feel if they know three foreign  
languages
, they will  
be envisaged
, intellectual persons. 
However
, those who support  
die
 of traditional  
languages
 promote keeping the  
old
 jargon, protects the nation from the peril of perishing. Evidence from other countries of Inner Mongolia. They  
still
 have been talking and writing to each other the mother tongue.  
Moreover
, Countries are putting  
a lot of
 literature into school programs to preserve their expression. Due to, they  
instil
 to relish the native vocabulary.  
For instance
, Cossack and  
Tyva
 republic have passed laws against retaining mother tongue. 
To conclude
, I would tend with support  
die
 of traditional 0speech. They can preserve their heritage and inculcate of adoration their native accent. 
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes