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In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? what could be done to encourage people to buy local food? v.7

In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? what could be done to encourage people to buy local food? v. 7
Nowadays people are able to purchase any kinds of some foodstuff from anywhere, whatever they want. Most of the countries people like to buy overseas foods which are imported. This essay will explore firstly, some reason why people buy imported feed and then will mention some of the steps which will be able to cheer people up to buy local foodstuff. On the one hand, many countries, people influenced on overseas meal, they choose to buy imported products, because there are lots of advantages. First and foremost, it can be said that the quality of imported bread is very good as well as delicious. One of the most significant or reasons is that most of the country has no land for cultivating snack. For instance, Bangladesh is a small country, it has a big amount of the population, all of demography chooses to buy imported food, due to according to the population, Bangladesh has no enough space for producing foodstuff. As a consequence, Bangladesh has to import foreign food. Repercussions more and more people like to purchase imported foodstuff then local meal. On the other hand, there are several ways available to solve this kind of problem. If government selects some space for cultivating foods, people will be produced lots of foods. As a consequence, people will get available meal. By this approach, people could be encouraged to buy local feed. In addition, nowadays the equipment of farming is expensive, for this reason, farmers don’t want to produce foodstuff. For example, Indian former cultivate a lot of onions and Indian people always buy their own onion, they don’t need to buy important onion. Those types of steps could be encouraged, people to buy local cooking. To conclude, this essay discussed some reason about people influence of imported snacks and some steps can be solved this problem like selecting some place for cultivating, by doing this people can be encouraged.
Nowadays
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people
are able to
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purchase
any kinds of
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some
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foodstuff
from anywhere, whatever they want. Most of the
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countries
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people
like to
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buy
overseas
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foods
which are
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imported
. This essay will explore
firstly
,
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reason
why
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people
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buy
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imported
feed and then will mention
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some of the
steps which will be able to cheer
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people
up to
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buy
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local
foodstuff.

On the one hand,
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many
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countries
,
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people
influenced on overseas meal, they choose to
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buy
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imported
products,
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because
there are lots of advantages.
First
and foremost, it can
be said
that the quality of
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imported
bread is
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very
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good
as well
as delicious. One of the most significant or
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reasons
is that most of the
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country
has no land for cultivating snack.
For instance
, Bangladesh is a
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small
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country
, it has a
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big
amount of the population,
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all of demography
chooses to
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buy
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imported
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food
, due to according to the population, Bangladesh has no
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enough
space for producing
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foodstuff
. As a consequence, Bangladesh
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has to
import foreign
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food
. Repercussions more and more
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people
like to
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purchase
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imported
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foodstuff
then
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local
meal.

On the other hand
, there are several ways available to solve this kind of problem. If
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government
selects
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some
space for cultivating
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foods
,
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people
will
be produced
lots of
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foods
. As a consequence,
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will
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get
available meal. By this approach,
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people
could
be encouraged
to
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buy
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local
feed.
In addition
, nowadays the equipment of farming is expensive, for this
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reason
, farmers don’t want to produce
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foodstuff
.
For example
, Indian former cultivate
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a lot of
onions and Indian
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people
always
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buy
their
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own
onion, they don’t need to
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buy
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important
onion. Those types of steps could
be encouraged
,
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people
to
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buy
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local
cooking.

To conclude
, this essay discussed
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about
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influence of
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snacks and
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steps can
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this problem like selecting
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place for cultivating, by doing this
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can
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.
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8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? what could be done to encourage people to buy local food? v. 7

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
319 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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