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In some countries, more and more people are buying imported food rather than buying food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What can be done to encourage people to buy locally produced food. v.2

In some countries, more and more people are buying imported food rather than buying food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What can be done to encourage people to buy locally produced food. v. 2
In some nations, there are an increase tendency in purchasing food which was imported from foreign countries compared domestic food. This essay will discuss some reasons for this choice and propose some solutions to enhance people to buy locally manufactured food. To begin with, there are some causes why people choose to buy imported food. First and foremost, it is believed that imported food from foreign countries have better qualities compared domestic one. For instance, fruit such as apple which derived from American or New Zealand was preferred than one planted in local area. Secondly, imported products have famous brand so people have truth on spending these foods. The fact indicates that customers tent to buy well-known food even with high price provided that they have large quantities. Moreover, imported food provide a variety of choices for people to decide to buy products which are good for them. There are some measures to raise the local food consumption. The first way is that the government should focus on investing the qualities of domestic food. The policies about verifying both the roof and qualities of products should be implemented to improve the truth of customers. Due to the fact that more high standard products have, the more revenues these goods raise. Other solution is to raise awareness of customers to use local products to increase the profit of nation' s economy. In addition, more strict policies and laws should be enacted, thus local food can compete against imported product. In conclusion, more and more people decide to purchase imported food because of being better quality and diversity of products. Some solutions about price and quantities of local food should carried out to increase the sales of domestic food.
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domestic
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. This essay will discuss
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reasons for this choice and propose
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solutions to enhance
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buy
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causes why
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people
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buy
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imported
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food
.
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and foremost, it
is believed
that
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imported
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food
from foreign countries have better
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qualities
compared
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domestic
one.
For instance
, fruit such as apple which derived from American or New Zealand
was preferred
than one planted in
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local
area.
Secondly
,
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imported
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products
have
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famous
brand
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so
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people
have truth on spending these
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foods
. The fact indicates that customers tent to
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buy
well-known
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food
even with high price provided that they have large quantities.
Moreover
,
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imported
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food
provide a variety of choices for
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people
to decide to
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buy
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products
which are
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good
for them.

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some
measures to raise the
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local
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consumption. The
first
way is that the
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government
should focus on investing the
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qualities
of
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domestic
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food
. The policies about verifying both the roof and
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qualities
of
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products
should
be implemented
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improve
the truth of customers. Due to the fact that more high standard
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products
have, the more revenues these
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goods
raise. Other solution is to raise awareness of customers to
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local
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to increase the profit of
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, more strict policies and laws should
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can compete against
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imported
product.

In conclusion
, more and more
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people
decide to
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purchase
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imported
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food
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because
of being better
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quality
and diversity of
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products
.
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Some
solutions about price and quantities of
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local
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food
should
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carried
out to increase the sales of
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domestic
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9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
48Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS essay In some countries, more and more people are buying imported food rather than buying food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What can be done to encourage people to buy locally produced food. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
287 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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