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In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food? v.5

In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food? v. 5
With the continuous development of globalization in the world, opinions have diverged on the issue of foreign food being purchased more than the domestic one. There are several reasons leading to this situation, and some solutions should be considered to boost the revenues of homegrown food. In the recent years, people show a tendency towards food made in foreign nations due to numerous causes. The first to mention is that many people state that food grown in overseas countries probably has higher quality compared to the local one. Some think that exotically food is cultivated in advanced conditions without the use of several poisonous chemicals such as pesticides or herbicides, which may do serious harm to consumers’ health. Secondly, in the past, the source of food seems to be limited to domestically produced one; however, recently, it has become easier for consumers to enjoy imported food due to the advance in international trade. For example, some international economic organizations were formed, such as the World Trade Organization, to simplify the process of trade among different countries. Notwithstanding, some measures should be confronted to help domestic food corporations obtain their position again. The most vital action is that food manufacturing companies should ensure the origin and improve the condition of their products. Therefore, these characteristics will likely boost the outcomes of domestic food because customers tend to purchase products that have better quality assurance. Moreover, the authority may raise the tariff on imported food, thereby the decline in foreign food consumption owing to the expensive prices. Another remedy is that local manufacturers should simultaneously contribute their products to different supermarkets and offer consumers free samples or discounts to raise the public encouragement. These methods, along with the exertion of inhabitants as well as domestic firms, possibly increase the demand for indigenous food. In conclusion, this phenomenon happens because of certain reasons included the quality assurance of foreign products and the growth in international transactions. This can be handled by restricting the amount of imported food and launching sales campaigns.
With the continuous development of globalization in the world, opinions have diverged on the issue of
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foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
being
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purchased
more than the
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domestic
one. There are several reasons leading to this situation, and
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some
solutions should
be considered
to boost the revenues of homegrown food.

In the recent years,
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people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
a tendency towards
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food
made in
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foreign
nations due to numerous causes. The
first
to mention is that
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many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
state that
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food
grown in overseas countries
probably
has higher quality compared to the local one.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that
exotically
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food
is cultivated
in advanced conditions without the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of several poisonous chemicals such as pesticides or herbicides, which may do serious harm to consumers’ health.
Secondly
, in the past, the source of
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food
seems to
be limited
to
domestically
produced one;
however
, recently, it has become easier for consumers to enjoy imported
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food
due to the advance in international trade.
For example
,
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some
international economic organizations
were formed
, such as the World Trade Organization, to simplify the process of trade among
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different
countries.

Notwithstanding,
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some
measures should
be confronted
to
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help
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domestic
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food
corporations obtain their position again. The most vital action is that
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food
manufacturing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
should ensure the origin and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the condition of their
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products
.
Therefore
, these characteristics will likely boost the outcomes of
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domestic
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food
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
customers tend to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
that have better quality assurance.
Moreover
, the authority may raise the tariff on imported
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
, thereby the decline in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
consumption owing to the expensive prices. Another remedy is that local manufacturers should
simultaneously
contribute their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
supermarkets and offer consumers free samples or discounts to raise the public encouragement. These methods, along with the exertion of inhabitants
as well
as
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domestic
firms,
possibly
increase the demand for indigenous food.

In conclusion
, this phenomenon happens
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of certain reasons included the quality assurance of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
and the growth in international transactions. This can
be handled
by restricting the amount of imported
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
and launching sales campaigns.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS essay In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food? v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
338 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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