There are a variety of perspectives about which are the crucial factors that can be used to reflect the prosperous nation. While I would agree that economic progress is a useful method to assess a country, I contend that there are several factors that can evaluate a nation’s success and education systems, to a certain extent, is the most important factor.
Education systems and crime rates should be considered as the key factors in determining a prosperous country. Firstly, a good education system included schools, colleges and universities has an important role to play in educating latent talents and bearing a large number of labours for nations. Secondly, crime rate should also be taken into account as the main contributor that has positive effects on the country’s success. In other words, the average crime rate indicates the adequacy of the citizen. If a country has a high crime rate, it means that innumerable citizens are living in poverty and the measures should be taken to alleviate and improve the people’s living standard.
In my opinion, a country’s education system should be seen as the most important indicator of its prosperity and level of development. The reason for this is education has an enormous impact on both economy and crime rates. People living in a good educational environment are not only taught common knowledge but also have better consciousness about moral principles. For example, those who are well educated have a rise in cognitive development which helps them know what is the right things to do and also seeking for a job that can help them cover the cost of living.
In conclusion, there are several factors that can be used to assess a country’s success, but I would contend that education plays an important role in the prosperity of a nation.
There are a variety of
perspectives about
which are the crucial
factors
that can be
used
to reflect the prosperous
nation
. While I would
agree
that economic progress is a useful method to assess a
country
, I contend that there are several
factors
that can evaluate a
nation’s
success and
education
systems
, to a certain extent, is the most
important
factor.
Education
systems
and
crime
rates
should
be considered
as the key
factors
in determining a prosperous
country
.
Firstly
, a
good
education
system
included schools, colleges and universities has an
important
role to play in educating latent talents and bearing
a large number of
labours
for
nations
.
Secondly
,
crime
rate
should
also
be taken
into account as the main contributor that has
positive
effects on the
country’s
success.
In other words
, the average
crime
rate
indicates the adequacy of the citizen. If a
country
has a high
crime
rate
, it means that innumerable citizens are living in poverty and the measures should
be taken
to alleviate and
improve
the
people
’s living standard.
In my opinion, a
country’s
education
system
should be
seen
as the most
important
indicator of its prosperity and level of development.
The reason for this is
education
has an enormous impact on both economy and
crime
rates
.
People
living in a
good
educational environment are not
only
taught common knowledge
but
also
have better consciousness about moral principles.
For example
, those who are
well educated
have a rise in cognitive development which
helps
them know what is the right things to do and
also
seeking for a job that can
help
them cover the cost of living.
In conclusion
, there are several
factors
that can be
used
to assess a
country’s
success,
but
I would contend that
education
plays an
important
role in the prosperity of a
nation
.
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