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In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food? v.4

In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food? v. 4
In recent years, there has been a growing trend towards buying imported food in lieu of locally produced food. This trend can be attributed to a whole host of reasons, some feasible solutions should be taken into account to tackle it. There are a number of reasons why people tend to prefer imported food to local one. First, since marketing programs become more popular in our society, imported food manufacturers pay a huge amount of money for these campaigns to target potential customers. Thus, local residents would be more attracted by this kind of food, contributing to their purchasing decisions. Second, by considering health-relating benefits, many people are convinced that imported food is safer than that produced locally. In fact, imported food must experience stricter examination processes before being imported, which allows people purchase them without any health-relating concern. Nevertheless, several ultimate measures could be implemented to tackle this issue. The first solution is that the local producers should pay money to marketing campaigns to attract more local residents. This means that the local products would gain in popularity in these sites, especially the nutrient composition and the process of making those, which is conducive to buying more local food. The second approach is that local manufacturers might improve their quality of food, which ensures more safer products to the customers. For example, if customers make a comparison between the imported products and local ones with the same quality, they might choose the local one thanks to the reasonable price. In conclusion, more and more local people are inclined to buy imported food in lieu of local one due to the lacks of marketing campaigns and the safety regulations of local products. However, the local food producers could take actions to address it.
In recent years, there has been a growing trend towards buying
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imported
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food
in lieu of
locally
produced
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food
. This trend can
be attributed
to a whole host of reasons,
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some
feasible solutions should
be taken
into account to tackle it.

There are a number of reasons why
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people
tend to prefer
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imported
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food
to
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local
one.
First
, since marketing programs become more popular in our society,
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imported
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food
manufacturers pay a huge amount of money for these campaigns to target potential customers.
Thus
,
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local
residents would be more attracted by this kind of
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food
, contributing to their purchasing decisions. Second, by considering health-relating benefits,
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many
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people
are convinced
that
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imported
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food
is safer than that produced
locally
. In fact,
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imported
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food
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must
experience stricter examination processes
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before
being
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imported
, which
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allows
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people
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purchase
them without any health-relating concern.

Nevertheless
, several ultimate measures could
be implemented
to tackle this issue. The
first
solution is that the
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local
producers should pay money to marketing campaigns to attract more
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local
residents. This means that the
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local
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products
would gain in popularity in these sites,
especially
the nutrient composition and the process of making those, which is conducive to buying more
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local
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food
. The second approach is that
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local
manufacturers might
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improve
their quality of
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food
, which ensures
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more safer
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products
to the customers.
For example
, if customers
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make
a comparison between the
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imported
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products
and
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local
ones with the same quality, they might choose the
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local
one thanks to the reasonable price.

In conclusion
, more and more
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local
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people
are inclined
to
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buy
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imported
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food
in lieu of
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local
one due to the lacks of marketing campaigns and the safety regulations of
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local
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products
.
However
, the
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local
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food
producers could take actions to address it.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food? v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
293 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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