It is worth considering whether separate areas for individual purposes. While many planners would like to arrange educational institutions and entertainment venues independently. I personally agree with this idea.
To begin with, following this idea can bring many drawbacks. It can be inconvenient for the students who live in the suburbs to reach their schools every day and have less access to the centre of the city as they may have to transfer many stations and buses or even travel several kilometres. For instance, new dwellers find it difficult to purchase furniture. If schools and corporations are built in the same area, it is more likely to cause road congestion on the main roads. Increased use of cars will emit harmful gases and aggravate the greenhouse effect.
However, having this plan in urban cities, it can control the population. I believe that many families would choose to live near the schools or their companies. Moreover, this suggestion also encourages more and more firms to move to the suburbs which leads to a decrease in pollution in the cities and an increase in employment rate. Besides, arranging shops in specific areas such as suburbs can make the lives in suburbs easier as well as they can get anything they want more expediently. Furthermore, the center of cities have more space for stunning natural landscape.
In conclusion, although it can bring disadvantages in some respects, I completely agree with it. However, there is still a long way to develop this scheme.
It is worth considering whether separate areas for individual purposes. While
many
planners would like to arrange educational institutions and entertainment venues
independently
. I
personally
agree
with this
idea
.
To
begin
with, following this
idea
can bring
many
drawbacks. It can be inconvenient for the students who
live
in the
suburbs
to reach their schools every day and have less access to the
centre
of the city as they may
have to
transfer
many
stations and buses or even travel several
kilometres
.
For instance
, new dwellers find it difficult to
purchase
furniture. If schools and corporations
are built
in the same area, it is more likely to cause road congestion on the main roads. Increased
use
of cars will emit harmful gases and aggravate the greenhouse effect.
However
, having this plan in urban
cities
, it can control the population. I believe that
many
families would choose to
live
near the schools or their
companies
.
Moreover
, this suggestion
also
encourages more and more firms to
move
to the
suburbs
which leads to a decrease in pollution in the
cities
and an increase in employment rate.
Besides
, arranging shops in specific areas such as
suburbs
can
make
the
lives
in
suburbs
easier
as
well as they can
get
anything they want more
expediently
.
Furthermore
, the center of
cities
have
more space for stunning natural landscape.
In conclusion
, although it can bring disadvantages in
some
respects, I completely
agree
with it.
However
, there is
still
a long way to develop this scheme.
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