There is no doubt that education is a crucial part of one's future especially in our modern society. Some people believe that universities must enroll same number of male and female students in each course. I totally disagree with this opinion and think that opportunities should not be based on gender. This essay will discuss few of the reasons behind my view.
First of all, limiting options for candidates based on their gender is an example of sexism. To illustrate, excellence is higher in number among female applicants than male and if acceptance is based on equality in number of both genders, this will definitely be unjust for some females who would have gotten the spot if that was not the rule. For instance, many young ladies had their chance taken away in different universities because of gender rule which led them being depressed and anxious about their future after working really hard to reach where they are. In other words, brilliance does not know gender.
Secondly, distinct jobs fit males more than females and vice versa. That is, specific specialties require power which you can find more in guys and others might need endurance that is more seen in girls. For example, majority of builders are males where as most of artist are females. Thus, different fields are suited more to a certain gender.
To conclude, to be accepted in university based on your gender status is unfair as it restrain excellence and put poeple at unsuited subjects. That's why I entirely disagree with having labelled seats for females and males in college enrollments.
There is no doubt that education is a crucial part of one's future
especially
in our modern society.
Some
people
believe that universities
must
enroll same number of male and
female
students in each course. I
totally
disagree with this opinion and
think
that opportunities should not
be based
on gender. This essay will discuss few of the reasons behind my view.
First of all
, limiting options for candidates based on their gender is an example of sexism. To illustrate, excellence is
higher in number
among
female
applicants than male and if acceptance
is based
on equality in number of both genders, this will definitely be unjust for
some
females
who would have gotten the spot if that was not the
rule
.
For instance
,
many
young ladies had their chance taken away in
different
universities
because
of gender
rule
which led them
being depressed
and anxious about their future after working
really
hard
to reach where they are.
In other words
, brilliance does not know gender.
Secondly
, distinct jobs fit
males
more than
females
and vice versa.
That is
, specific specialties require power which you can find more in guys
and others
might need endurance
that is
more
seen
in girls.
For example
,
majority of
builders are
males
where as
most of artist
are
females
.
Thus
,
different
fields
are suited
more to a certain gender.
To conclude
, to be
accepted
in university based on your gender status is unfair as it
restrain
excellence and put
poeple
at unsuited subjects. That's why I
entirely
disagree with having labelled seats for
females
and
males
in college enrollments.
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