Equality of males and females are believed by many persons, therefore, they claim, girls should do jobs according to their liking and preferences. But many other people believe that there is a huge difference between both the genders. I firmly believe that, girls and boys are having lots of differences, but still they should have equal social status, as they both are crucial for the society and they should choose the work according to their skills and capabilities.
Firstly, nobody can deny from the physical strength of the boys which is quite more than the physical power of the girls. Therefore, it is better for girls if they will not get enrolled in those works which demand heavy lifting and weight. Thus this factor clearly depicts, females are not suitable for heavy lifting and physical hard working jobs, but boys are good for this work. If the ladies will do heavy workload, it will affect worse to their bodies which could lead to bad back pain and disc problem as well.
Secondly, mental strength of girls is more immense than boys. Females can provide required attention to more than one work at one time, which males can never do. Boys get bored easily they cannot stick to one place for the whole day. Therefore, office and sedentary jobs are mostly filled by females and they are performing well over there.
In conclusion, I reiterate, the power of both the sexes is different and therefore their working field also different, if they will collapse their field if will affect bad for their health and growth, moreover performance will also get affected.
Equality of males and
females
are believed
by
many
persons,
therefore
, they claim,
girls
should do jobs according to their liking and preferences.
But
many
other
people
believe that there is a huge difference between both the genders. I
firmly
believe that,
girls
and
boys
are having lots of differences,
but
still
they should have equal social status, as they both are crucial for the
society and
they should choose the
work
according to their
skills
and capabilities.
Firstly
, nobody can deny from the physical strength of the
boys
which is quite more than the physical power of the
girls
.
Therefore
, it is better for
girls
if they will not
get
enrolled in those works which demand heavy lifting and weight.
Thus
this factor
clearly
depicts,
females
are not suitable for heavy lifting and physical
hard working
jobs,
but
boys
are
good
for this
work
. If the ladies
will do
heavy workload, it will affect worse to their bodies which could lead to
bad
back pain and disc problem
as well
.
Secondly
, mental strength of
girls
is more immense than
boys
.
Females
can provide required attention to more than one
work
at one time, which males can never do.
Boys
get
bored
easily
they cannot stick to one place for the whole day.
Therefore
, office and sedentary jobs are
mostly
filled by
females and
they are performing well over there.
In conclusion
, I reiterate, the power of both the sexes is
different
and
therefore
their working field
also
different
, if they will collapse their field if will affect
bad
for their health and growth,
moreover
performance will
also
get
affected
.
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21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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