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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? v. 10

Old-age in itself is a very complex part of life as compared to other phases. In countries like Britain where kids do not stay with their parents, there is a concept where old people tend to live together and generally, the Government pays for the nurse to look after. The question arises that who should be liable to pay for these expenses? Whether it should be borne by the Government or by the Family of these fellows? This essay will focus on the challenges being faced by people from Old age and share views on expenses too. Old-age, bring a very critical time of one's life, where a person becomes sensitive enough to feel sick often, plus getting anything done without any help becomes difficult as well. It is good to know that despite living lonely, people choose to live with their fellow mates of the same age group and intellect, where they get to share their views and posses a one-generation mindset. With the growing age, everyone needs a little and in fact, continuous care which in return comes with a lot of expenses too. The fact that the Government bearing the cost shows that the country is looking after their senior-citizens which anyone expects from his or her motherland, someone who has been an honest taxpayer, this is a way his/her country is thanking them. However, although The Government pays for expenditures of a nurse, I believe their family should also play a part here. As a kid, our parents have been taking care of us from the very beginning and it's the duty of kids to take care of them too. Besides the Nurse, there are some small expenditures too, which can be borne by the family in a share.

IELTS essay In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.10

Old
-age in itself is a
very
complex part of life as compared to other phases. In countries like Britain where kids do not stay with their parents, there is a concept where
old
people
tend to
live
together and
generally
, the
Government
pays for the nurse to look after. The question arises that who should be liable to pay for these expenses? Whether it should
be borne
by the
Government
or by the Family of these fellows? This essay will focus on the challenges
being faced
by
people
from
Old
age and share views on expenses too.
Old
-age, bring a
very
critical time of one's life, where a person becomes sensitive
enough
to feel sick
often
, plus getting anything done without any
help
becomes difficult
as well
. It is
good
to know that despite living lonely,
people
choose to
live
with their fellow mates of the same age group and intellect, where they
get
to share their views and posses a one-generation mindset. With the growing age, everyone needs a
little
and in fact, continuous care which in return
comes
with
a lot of
expenses too. The fact that the
Government
bearing the cost
shows
that the country is looking after their senior-citizens which anyone
expects
from
his or her
motherland, someone who has been an honest taxpayer, this is a way his/her country is thanking them.
However
, although The
Government
pays for expenditures of a nurse, I believe their family should
also
play a part here. As a kid, our parents have been taking care of us from the
very
beginning and it's the duty of kids to take care of them too.
Besides
the Nurse, there are
some
small
expenditures too, which can
be borne
by the family in a share.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
Essay
5 paragraphs
293 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resources: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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