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If food tastes good, it is probably bad for you. How far do you agree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion v.2

If food tastes good, it is probably bad for you. How far Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion v. 2
I personally agree with the statement that if food tastes good, it is probably bad for me. There are a few reasons why I feel this way. One of the reasons is that nowadays, food producing compnies make everything to sell their products, whithout thinking of concequences. Modern food, especially the processed one, contains a myriad of artificial flavors. Those flavors are chemicals, which are likely to harm people`s health. For instance, some people experience tremendous problems, such as stomach pain, after consuming different kind of snacks. Moreover, it is the scientifically proved fact that these taisty foods have in their content certain substances, which can cause cancer. If the companies decrease number of the artificial flavors in the products, the food will taste less attractive. Despite people`s desire to eat delicious foods, they have to think what kind of drawbacks it will bring them in the future. To that end, humans should read carefully the content of the food they buy in the grocery stores. Another reason is that the more beneficial for humans food is tasteless. To be clear, most of the vegetables, which include a variety ov vitamins, so advantaguous for people`s wellbeing, are lack of taste, if cooked without oil or salt. Oil and batter tend to enhance level of bad cholesterol, and lead to heart deseases. High concentration of salt, in tern, is egregious for humans` joints and bones. If people prepare vegatables with a meager amount of oil and salt, they can avoid acquiring heart and joints illness in early age, or elliminate them at all. Despite of oppinion that we live just one life and must to enjoy it from different aspects, people should think about their health in advance. So, in most the cases the less dilicious the food, the most it safe. To sum it up, I feel that when I eat something really tasty, it is going to be danger for my health. This is because, today`s food ful of harmful chamicals and while cooking, people very often overlook negative consequences of that.
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personally
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with the statement that if
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tastes
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, it is
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for me. There are a few reasons why I feel this way.

One of the reasons is that nowadays,
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food
producing
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compnies
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make
everything to sell their products,
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whithout
thinking of
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concequences
. Modern
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food
,
especially
the processed one, contains a myriad of artificial flavors. Those flavors are chemicals, which are likely to harm
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people`s
health.
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some
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people
experience tremendous problems, such as stomach pain, after consuming
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different
kind of snacks.
Moreover
, it is the
scientifically
proved fact that these
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taisty
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foods
have in their content certain substances, which can cause cancer. If the
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companies
decrease number of the artificial flavors in the products, the
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food
will taste less attractive. Despite
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people`s
desire to eat delicious
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foods
, they
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have to
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think
what kind of drawbacks it will bring them in the future. To that
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end
, humans should read
carefully
the content of the
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food
they
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buy
in the grocery stores.

Another reason is that the more beneficial for humans
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food
is tasteless. To be
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clear
, most of the vegetables, which include a variety
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ov
vitamins,
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so
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advantaguous
for
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people`s
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wellbeing
, are lack of taste, if cooked without oil or salt. Oil and batter tend to enhance level of
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bad
cholesterol, and lead to heart
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deseases
. High concentration of salt, in tern, is egregious for humans` joints and bones. If
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people
prepare
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vegatables
with a meager amount of oil and salt, they can avoid acquiring heart and joints illness in early age, or
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elliminate
them at all.
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oppinion
that we
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live
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one life and
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must to
enjoy it from
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different
aspects,
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people
should
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think
about their health in advance.
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, in most the cases the less
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dilicious
the
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food
, the most
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it
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safe
.

To sum it up, I feel that when I eat something
really
tasty, it is going to be
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danger
for my health. This is
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because
,
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today`s
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food
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ful
of harmful
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chamicals
and while cooking,
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people
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very
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often
overlook
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negative
consequences of that.
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17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
22Mistakes

IELTS essay If food tastes good, it is probably bad for you. How far Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
343 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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