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Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.14

Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 14
Nowadays each thing became very fast, people do not want to waste their time in inappropriate things like washing clothes, making food, cleaning floors, washing dishes. For each and everyday technology comes with new innovation that made the things very easy and comfortable for the human and to making a food is one of the part of it. However, I personally think that nowadays, food has become very easier to prepare and it changes the way people live because of the few reasons. First, Today`s people are so busy in their work and women are no left behind. Nowadays women do not get that much time to make a food that they spent few decades ago. To save time we use so many things in our daily life. For example, Fridge- to make food fresh, oven- to make food warm, toaster- to save time from toasting a breads. So food has become very easy to prepare and it also brings the same nutrition level. To keep the food taste there are so many premade pouches of ingredients are there. So there are so many others ways to make the food very easily. Second, the technology also change the way we live. People prefer the things that took less time so they can focus on their own things. Likewise, nowadays people prefer fast food to save their time, also in grocery store people prefer to by precut vegetables. In addition, people prefer to buy premade pizza, subs, noodles so they can put in the fridge and when they want to eat they just have to put in oven for few minutes and that`s way they want to save their lots of time and these changes the way we lives. To sum up with, there is no dough that nowadays to making food become very easier because of the new innovations made the things very compatible for the human and it also change the way the people lives.
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,
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people
do not want to waste their
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in inappropriate things like washing clothes, making
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food
, cleaning floors, washing dishes. For each and everyday technology
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comes
with new innovation that made the things
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very
easy and comfortable for the human and to making a
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food
is one of the part of it.
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personally
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think
that
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nowadays
,
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food
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very
easier to prepare and it
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changes
the way
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people
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live
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because
of the few reasons.

First
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time
to
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that they spent few decades ago. To
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time
we
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use
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so
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things in our daily life.
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, Fridge- to
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make
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food
fresh, oven- to
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make
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food
warm, toaster- to
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save
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time
from toasting
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a breads
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food
has become
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easy to prepare and it
also
brings the same nutrition level. To
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the
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food
taste there are
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so
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many
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premade
pouches of ingredients are there.
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also
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things.
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food
to
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their
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,
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in grocery store
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people
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precut
vegetables.
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people
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premade
pizza, subs, noodles
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they can put in the fridge and when they want to eat they
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put in oven for few minutes and
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way they want to
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save
their lots of
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time
and these
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changes
the way we
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lives
.

To sum up with, there is no dough that
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nowadays
to making
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food
become
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very
easier
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because
of the new innovations made the things
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very
compatible for the human and it
also
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change
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people
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lives
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9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
47Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 14

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
326 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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