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If children behave badly should their parents take responsibility and also be punished State your answer and give your reasons v.2

If children behave badly should their parents take responsibility and also be punished State your answer and give your reasons v. 2
Sabikunnahar Rony Sun, Apr 5, 10: 16 PM (9 hours ago) to me Children acquire their basic and primary knowledge from their parents who provide initial elements of getting such knowledge. These days, there is a debate that whether parents are responsible for their misdeeds and should they be punished because of their wrong doings. I strongly believe that, if juveniles do any misdoings their parents should take the responsibility as they bring their children in this world. There are ample reasons that sorrounded my opinion. Firstly, according to me, parents should take proper care to their child' s grow up as they bring them on the earth so it is their own responsibility to brought them up properly. As they are child they have no knowledge about any bad activities and also they are unaware about anything that is against morality. They are parents who should teach their pagony and spend with them a quantity of time. In this present days, Father along with their mother work in outside so that they are not able to allocate their time properly with their children. However, their children did not get proper guidance from them and they try to spend most of their times by watching TV, chatting with friends sometimes their parents keep them under maid guidance. For this reason sometimes juvelines accept misdeeds as morals, for which some how their parents are responsible. Secondly, if parents did not show any attention towards their children, they will do this wrong with their teachers and elders. When child do any mistake parents should make them aware about their such mistakes. On the other hand, they should take under punishment which must be little like: forbidden to play games with best friend or not to give their favourite dish to eat and so on. For instance, one of my neighbours went out for job keeping their ten years daughter under the care of house maid. As a result this girl uesd to do misbehave with her parents under wrong companies and as a penulty her parents locked her in a dark room. One day later the parents find their daughter dead. So, parents should assure their proper guidance towards their pagony otherwise it will be harder for them to control them if they grown up with such unethical actions. To sum up, I want to conclude my opinion with the saying that, home is the first institution for learning where parents are the best mentors. Take care of children and give them right ethics is the first and foremost duty of every parents. If children did any misdeeds parents should accept their responsibility and correct them with small penulty not hard punishment.
Sabikunnahar
Rony


Sun, Apr 5, 10: 16 PM (9 hours ago)

to me

Children acquire their basic and primary knowledge from their
parents
who provide initial elements of getting such knowledge. These days, there is a debate that whether
parents
are responsible for their misdeeds and should they
be punished
because
of their
wrong
doings. I
strongly
believe that, if juveniles do any misdoings their
parents
should take the responsibility as they bring their
children
in this world. There are ample reasons that
sorrounded
my opinion.

Firstly
, according to me,
parents
should take proper care to their
child&
#039; s grow up as they bring them on the earth
so
it is their
own
responsibility to brought them up
properly
. As they are child they have no knowledge about any
bad
activities and
also
they are unaware about anything
that is
against morality. They are
parents
who should teach their
pagony
and spend with them a quantity of time. In this present days, Father along with their mother work in outside
so
that they are not able to allocate their time
properly
with their
children
.
However
, their
children
did not
get
proper guidance from
them and
they try to spend most of their times by watching TV, chatting with friends
sometimes
their
parents
keep
them under maid guidance.
For this reason
sometimes
juvelines
accept misdeeds as morals, for which
some how
their
parents
are responsible.

Secondly
, if
parents
did not
show
any attention towards their
children
, they will do this
wrong
with their teachers and elders.
When
child do any mistake
parents
should
make
them aware about their such mistakes.
On the other hand
, they should take under punishment which
must
be
little
like: forbidden to play games with best friend or not to give their
favourite
dish to eat and
so
on.
For instance
, one of my
neighbours
went out for job keeping their ten years daughter under the care of
house
maid.
As a result
this girl
uesd
to do misbehave with her
parents
under
wrong
companies
and as a
penulty
her
parents
locked her in a dark room. One day later the
parents
find their daughter dead.
So
,
parents
should assure their proper guidance towards their
pagony
otherwise
it will be harder for them to control them if they grown up with such unethical actions.

To sum up, I want
to conclude
my opinion with the saying that, home is the
first
institution for learning where
parents
are the best mentors. Take care of
children
and give them right ethics is the
first
and foremost duty of every
parents
. If
children
did any misdeeds
parents
should accept their responsibility and correct them with
small
penulty
not
hard
punishment.
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IELTS essay If children behave badly should their parents take responsibility and also be punished State your answer and give your reasons v. 2

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
450 words
5.5
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