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IELTS essay training is far more important than providing broad based education. To what extent do you agree or disagree. v.1

IELTS essay training is far more important than providing broad based education. v. 1
It is an undeniable fact that the practical as well as theoretical knowledge is the central part of an education. However, IELTS essay training has more weightage than comprehensive studies and I totally agree with given the statement and the reasons for it will be elaborated in the following paragraphs. Apparently, a broad based education is most emphasis on experience and experiment in which learner find difficulty to choose learning methods. This is because it has myriad of options to opt it which requires adequate information about the subject. Besides this, at the times students want to gain experience through internships which enhance their knowledge in the particular field, but it has adversely effect on the long bases such as, they become money-orianted. According to the a recent survey has been conducted by Yale University reveals that, more than 45% of students who have opt liberal studies they live materialistic life which has negative impact on their academic. Thus, the broad based education concept is inappropriate to for the students. Nonetheless, there are prominent factors of IELTS essay training that is useful to students. First and foremost, the way of presenting a viewpoint of writer could be learnt from essay writing. In other words, the organisation of thoughts and opinions are vital for readers which gives a core information about the topic, and at the same time coherence and cohesion method helps in to represent the clear view about the context. For instance, without writers opinion the piece of writing does not covery the message to the readers which might cause a misinterpretation about the subject. With the help of essay writing method assist canadiate to give precise view for topics. Secondly, it not only improve writing skills, but also provide profound knowledge of grammar and vocabulary. This is because IELTS writing need range sentence structures, which help writers to give variation in their writing. Apart from this, writing skill also teaches a appropriate use of words for the particular topic that helps in learning new words and phrases for impressive writing. The methodology of IELTS essay writing is used by Shashi Tharoor in his Articles which reflects the clear Idea. Therefore, writing skill is needed for presenting perfect ideas as well as it also boost writing knowledge. In conclusion, it is truly said that, IELTS writing has paramount in comparison to the board-based study. However, I'm in the favour of it, due to its presentation style and basic knowledge which enhances the learner writing skill for their sustainable future.
It is an undeniable fact that the practical
as well
as theoretical
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knowledge
is the central part of an education.
However
, IELTS
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essay
training has more weightage than comprehensive studies and I
totally
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agree
with
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given
the statement and the reasons for it will
be elaborated
in the following paragraphs.

Apparently
, a broad based education is most emphasis on experience and experiment in which learner find difficulty to choose
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learning
methods. This is
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because
it has myriad of options to opt it which requires adequate information about the subject.
Besides
this, at the times students want to gain experience through internships which enhance their
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knowledge
in the particular field,
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but
it has
adversely
effect on the long bases such as, they become
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money-orianted
. According to
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the a
recent survey has
been conducted
by Yale University reveals that, more than 45% of students who have
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opt
liberal studies they
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live
materialistic life which has
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negative
impact on their academic.
Thus
, the broad based education concept is inappropriate to for the students.

Nonetheless, there are prominent factors of IELTS
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essay
training
that is
useful to students.
First
and foremost, the way of presenting a viewpoint of writer could be
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learnt
from
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essay
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writing
.
In other words
, the
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organisation
of thoughts and opinions are vital for readers which gives a core information about the topic, and at the same time coherence and cohesion method
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helps
in to represent the
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clear
view about the context.
For instance
, without writers opinion the piece of
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writing
does not
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covery
the message to the readers which might cause a misinterpretation about the subject. With the
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help
of
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essay
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writing
method assist
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canadiate
to give precise view for topics.
Secondly
, it not
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only
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improve
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writing
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skills
,
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but
also
provide profound
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knowledge
of grammar and vocabulary. This is
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because
IELTS
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writing
need range sentence structures, which
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help
writers to give variation in their
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writing
. Apart from this,
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writing
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skill
also
teaches
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a
appropriate
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use
of words for the particular topic that
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helps
in learning new words and phrases for impressive
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writing
. The methodology of IELTS
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essay
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writing
is
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used
by
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Shashi
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Tharoor
in his Articles which reflects the
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clear
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Idea
.
Therefore
,
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writing
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skill
is needed
for presenting perfect
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ideas
as well
as it
also
boost
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writing
knowledge.

In conclusion
, it is
truly
said that, IELTS
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writing
has paramount
in comparison
to the board-based study.
However
, I'm in the
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favour
of it, due to its presentation style and basic
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knowledge
which enhances the learner
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writing
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skill
for their sustainable future.
24Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Mistakes

IELTS essay IELTS essay training is far more important than providing broad based education. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
420 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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