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Agree or disagree it is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject? Agree or disagree it is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject? Althoug v.1

Agree or disagree it is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject? Agree or disagree it is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject? Althoug v. 1
It is true that climate change has become a serious human issue, because of it is a major threat to life on Earth, but some people argue that we need accept it, as opposed to try to address with this problem. I do not give the seal of approval with above mentioned opinion, because I believe that human can impact on the Earth’s climate. On the one hand, there are various measures that government and individuals could take to prevent or at least mitigate climate change. The government should introduce some tangible beneficially laws about the main reasons which prompting to climate change. Firstly, they can impose “green taxes” on drivers, manufacturing companies that have an adverse effect on air with polluters. Secondly, they could invest in renewable energy production from solar, wind or water power. Additionally, as individuals, we should also try to impact our positive contribution to climate change, by becoming more energy efficient, by more using bicycle rather than transport. Finally, Voting for politicians who propose to tackle this problem is a good example of preventing climate change by the public. On the other hand, if we continue to be indifferent to climate change, human will be faced miserable consequences. Mountain landslide which could have determined by specialist in New Zealand, for example, is prompted several disastrous. Several of people are injured and diet. Most of them lost their homes and forced to migrate to nearby cities or other countries. Also, this will be lead to some outbreak of diseases and famine, increased homelessness in the country. In conclusion, I believe that the government and individuals can find ways to solve climate change related problem.
It is true that
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climate
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change
has become a serious human issue,
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because
of it is a major threat to life on Earth,
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but
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some
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people
argue that we need accept it, as opposed to try to address with this problem. I do not give the seal of approval with above mentioned opinion,
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because
I believe that human can impact on the Earth’s climate.

On the one hand, there are various measures that
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government
and individuals could take to
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prevent
or at least mitigate
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climate
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change
. The
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government
should introduce
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some
tangible
beneficially
laws about the main reasons which prompting to
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climate
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change
.
Firstly
, they can impose “green taxes” on drivers, manufacturing
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companies
that have an adverse effect on air with polluters.
Secondly
, they could invest in renewable energy production from solar, wind or water power.
Additionally
, as individuals, we should
also
try to impact our
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positive
contribution to
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climate
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change
, by becoming more energy efficient, by more using bicycle
rather
than transport.
Finally
, Voting for politicians who propose to tackle this problem is a
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good
example of preventing
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climate
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change
by the public.

On the other hand
, if we continue to be indifferent to
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climate
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change
, human will
be faced
miserable consequences. Mountain landslide which could have determined by specialist in New Zealand,
for example
,
is prompted
several disastrous. Several of
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people
are injured
and diet. Most of them lost their homes and forced to migrate to nearby cities or other countries.
Also
, this will be lead to
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some
outbreak of diseases and famine, increased homelessness in the country.

In conclusion
, I believe that the
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government
and individuals can find ways to solve
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climate
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change
related problem.
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IELTS essay Agree or disagree it is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject? Agree or disagree it is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject? Althoug v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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