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Human activity has had a negative effect on plants and animal all over the world. Some people think that it is too late to do something about it. Others think that there is still time to take effective action. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. v.1

Human activity has had a negative effect on plants and animal all over the world. Some people think that it is too late to do something about it. Others think that there is still time to take effective action. v. 1
In this era of advancement, the trend of learning different languages is gaining heat. Some folks consider that it is an entirely necessary to know about the traditions and living style of the people from a particular region in the plan to learn a language. This essay will argue that how it will be helpful to know about culture and lifestyle if someone wants to learn an accent. To begin with, some people think that it is not desirable to learn about in depth about a country in order to learn a dialect. They believe that it is a wastage of time. They feel it is a distraction from the right path. Indeed, if someone will focused on the values and the way of living, then it will be time consuming and this might be distracting that person towards anything else rather than focusing on learn a word. These are the instances that why people say it is far more important firstly to learn about customs of that country. Despite the few reasons are associated with learning, cultural customs, the idea of learning traditional values in order to learn a language is completely desirable. To learn culture and lifestyle of the people of that country leads to more accurate insight. It will also help to broaden the knowledge level. For example, vocabulary is always related to the customs and the way of living there, so that makes the learning process easy and interesting. Through the in depth awareness one can easily apply that education. Overall, the idea of learning, cultural values of country first is entirely necessary. To conclude, this essay discussed that the people who are in the favour of learning directly language have a wrong understanding and underestimate the importance of tradition. In my opinion, I absolutely agree that one should learn culture first in the form to learn the terminology.
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learning
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different
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languages
is gaining heat.
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Some
folks consider that it is an
entirely
necessary to know about the traditions and living style of the
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people
from a particular region in the plan to
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learn
a
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language
. This essay will argue that how it will be helpful to know about culture and lifestyle if someone wants to
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learn
an accent.

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begin
with,
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some
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people
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think
that it is not desirable to
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learn
about in depth about a country in order to
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learn
a dialect. They believe that it is a wastage of time. They feel it is a distraction from the right path.
Indeed
, if someone will
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focused
on the values and the way of living, then it will be
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time consuming
and this might be distracting that person towards anything else
rather
than focusing on
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learn
a word. These are the instances that why
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people
say it is far more
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important
firstly
to
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learn
about customs of that country.

Despite the few reasons
are associated
with
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learning
, cultural customs, the
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idea
of
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learning
traditional values in order to
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learn
a
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language
is completely desirable. To
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learn
culture and lifestyle of the
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people
of that country leads to more accurate insight. It will
also
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help
to broaden the knowledge level.
For example
, vocabulary is always related to the customs and the way of living there,
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so
that
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makes
the
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learning
process easy and interesting. Through the in depth awareness one can
easily
apply that education.
Overall
, the
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idea
of
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learning
, cultural values of country
first
is
entirely
necessary.

To conclude
, this essay discussed that the
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people
who are in the
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favour
of
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learning
directly
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language
have a
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wrong
understanding and underestimate the importance of tradition. In my opinion, I
absolutely
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agree
that one should
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learn
culture
first
in the form to
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learn
the terminology.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
The limits of my language are the limits of my world.
Ludwig Wittgenstein

IELTS essay Human activity has had a negative effect on plants and animal all over the world. Some people think that it is too late to do something about it. Others think that there is still time to take effective action. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
313 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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