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High stakes English language tests, such as the IELTS, are increasingly being delivered on the computer Do the advantages of computer-based testing outweigh the disadvantages? v.1

High stakes English language tests, such as the IELTS, are increasingly being delivered on the computer Do the advantages of computer-based testing outweigh the disadvantages? v. 1
Technology is such an indisputable aspect of our life and technology already being implemented in numerous things in our life. Moreover, high-risk English tests, like IELTS, are having more tendency to be conducted on the computer. I strongly believe that we can gain a multitude of merit rather than the disadvantages. First off, the result of the test is faster, rather than a paper-based test. In addition, we don't need to go to an institution or a company that held the test itself, we can just wait for the result at our home because we can check it online. For example; I already took a mandarin test last month and I did the test by computer-based, and after I finished my exam and waiting for the result I was so surprised because the result it came up faster than I thought. When I took the paper-based test I need to wait for almost 1 month for the result, while utilizing computer-based it just needs to take 2 weeks for the result. Furthermore, we can save our time by doing a computer-based test. Moreover, if we took a paper-based test we need approximately 3-4 hours to complete the test, while, computer-based test only took 1-2 hours. There was a research conducted by a foreign language teacher from Monash University in 2015, he invited an array of students that have higher frequency to take a test. The result is showing that almost 90% of the participants are more likely to choose a computer-based test rather than the paper-based one. To conclude, a computer-based test has a plethora of beneficial things rather than demerits.
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being implemented
in numerous things in our life.
Moreover
, high-
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tests
, like IELTS, are having more tendency to
be conducted
on the computer. I
strongly
believe that we can gain a multitude of merit
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rather
than the disadvantages.

First
off, the
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result
of the
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test
is faster,
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rather
than a paper-based
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test
.
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, we don't
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need
to go to an institution or a
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company
that held the
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itself, we can
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at our home
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check
it online.
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a mandarin
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last month and I did the
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test
by computer-based, and after I finished my exam and waiting for the
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result
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because
the
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it came up faster than I
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. When I
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the paper-based
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to wait for almost 1 month for the
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, while utilizing computer-based it
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Furthermore
, we can save our time by doing a computer-based
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.
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, if we
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a paper-based
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we
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approximately 3-4 hours to complete the
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, while, computer-based
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1-2 hours.

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a research
conducted by a foreign language teacher from Monash University in 2015, he invited an array of students that have higher frequency to take a
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test
. The
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result
is showing that almost 90% of the participants are more likely to choose a computer-based
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test
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rather
than the paper-based one.

To conclude
, a computer-based
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test
has a plethora of beneficial things
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rather
than demerits.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay High stakes English language tests, such as the IELTS, are increasingly being delivered on the computer Do the advantages of computer-based testing outweigh the disadvantages? v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
271 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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