"These days One of the most spoken issues is whether government should avoid spending on public celebrations. Since I believe such activities are vital for a country’s customs and traditions, I disagree with this notion.
To begin with important events in the history like nation’s independence, formation of republic government is vital milestones achieved by enormous hard work and sacrifices of our ancestors. It is mandatory to appreciate and acknowledge the privilege given to us by honouring and remembering them. For instance, on Independence day, authorities spend a lot of money to organize events from parades to cultural events like dance, music and art which portray our culture and heritage. These events attract people from around the nation and even from remote countries to witness the grand celebration. This, in turn brings in more money to the economy through people’s travel, shopping and sometimes even through donation.
Another Reason why I disagree because festivals like Holi, Diwali are celebrated across the nation in a grand manner, which I feel is crucial for individuals and for society. The government is setting up a platform for these festivals, facilitate people to come together and enjoy. Nowadays, most of the families are nuclear, and an event like this in the city gives them an opportunity to get out and spend time with friends and families. Furthermore, it helps our next generation to learn why we celebrate by learning our history and the intricacies of the rituals followed in each kind of festival.
In conclusion, I firmly agree that money used by the ministry of the nation for celebrating the festivities and social events are essential as it ensures to bring peace and union in the country
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These days One of the most spoken issues is whether
government
should avoid spending on public celebrations. Since I believe such activities are vital for a country’s customs and traditions, I disagree with this notion.
To
begin
with
important
events
in the history like
nation’s
independence, formation of republic
government
is vital milestones achieved by enormous
hard
work and sacrifices of our ancestors. It is mandatory to appreciate and acknowledge the privilege
given
to us by
honouring
and remembering them.
For instance
, on
Independence day
, authorities spend
a lot of
money to organize
events
from parades to cultural
events
like dance, music and art which portray our culture and heritage. These
events
attract
people
from around the
nation
and even from remote countries to witness the grand celebration. This, in turn brings in more money to the economy through
people
’s travel, shopping and
sometimes
even through donation.
Another Reason why I disagree
because
festivals like
Holi
, Diwali
are celebrated
across the
nation
in a grand manner
, which I feel is crucial for individuals and for society. The
government
is setting up a platform for these festivals, facilitate
people
to
come
together and enjoy. Nowadays, most of the families are nuclear, and an
event
like this in the city gives them an opportunity to
get
out and spend time with friends and families.
Furthermore
, it
helps
our
next
generation to learn why we celebrate by learning our history and the intricacies of the rituals followed in each kind of festival.
In conclusion
, I
firmly
agree
that money
used
by the ministry of the
nation
for celebrating the festivities and social
events
are essential as it ensures to bring peace and union in the country
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