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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.14

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. with this statement? v. 14
Implementing proper transport facilities to provide the nation is a challenge for any government. Whether a vast rail network or an improved road transport system can better facilitate the transportation of goods and commuters is a never-ending debate. I believe that fast rails are the conveyance of the future because administrators should spend money on building and developing rail networks. On one hand, trains are faster and can carry a large number of passengers and goods at a time. When thousands of cars carry office-goers and students each day in a city, only a few shuttle trains can do the same. Traffic congestion kills millions of work hours per years and costs billions of dollars and it is caused basically by the sheer number of road transports we use every day. According to a report published by the Road Transport Authority in Pakistan, traffic congestion in Karachi city eats up 3. 2 million working hours per day. A vast network of railways is the only alternative to curb the loss. Expanding roads in cities are almost impossible as they must interconnect the existing lanes. Locomotives, primarily use railroads built aside the cities and consume less space. Effectively managed train system does not cause congestion and save time. By considering the transportation of the future, its developed nation subsidies heavily in developing their transport facilities and they invest more in expanding their rail lines. My opinion is government should plan for the future, considering the facilities and impact on the environment, while investing in infrastructure development. As locomotives offer more conveniences than road transports do, it deserves more budget.
Implementing proper
transport
facilities to provide the nation is a challenge for any
government
. Whether a vast
rail
network or an
improved
road
transport
system can better facilitate the transportation of
goods
and commuters is a never-ending debate. I believe that
fast
rails are the conveyance of the future
because
administrators should spend money on building and developing
rail
networks.

On one hand, trains are faster and can carry
a large number of
passengers and
goods
at a time. When thousands of cars carry office-goers and students each day in a city,
only
a few shuttle trains can do the same. Traffic congestion kills millions of work hours per years and costs billions of dollars and it
is caused
basically
by the sheer number of
road
transports
we
use
every day. According to a report published by the
Road
Transport
Authority in Pakistan, traffic congestion in Karachi city eats up 3. 2 million working hours per day. A vast network of railways is the
only
alternative to curb the loss.

Expanding
roads
in
cities
are almost impossible as they
must
interconnect the existing lanes. Locomotives,
primarily
use
railroads built aside the
cities
and consume less space.
Effectively
managed train system does not cause congestion and save time. By considering the transportation of the future, its developed nation subsidies
heavily
in developing their
transport
facilities and
they invest more in expanding their
rail
lines.

My opinion is
government
should plan for the future, considering the facilities and impact on the environment, while investing in infrastructure development. As locomotives offer more conveniences than
road
transports
do, it deserves more budget.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. with this statement? v. 14

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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