People have different views about whether or not governments should help senior citizens. I completely disagree with the idea that elderly people should receive no support from the state.
First, there are different social class which has a varied range of salary number. In this situation, some people may not be capable of affording their retire life on their own while others do not worry about running out of supplies at their retire age. To name a few, a part-time worker or a blue-collar worker may earn the number just meet as much as his daily needs. While they are too old to work, they lose their source of income and be put in financial difficulties. To contrast, a manager or a white-collar may earn much than a blue-collar and be able of saving for his retire consumption. Out of the reason that all workers make a huge contribute to our state economy and tax income, it seems to be more justice and fair when the government be responsible of affording their retire expenditure.
Apart from that, elderly people need more financial support for their health care in general. As the health care of older people are always expensive and the old have more chance to get extra health expenditure such as some routine health examine or some chronic treatment. Those medicine treatments tend to be persistent and have expensive charge.
From what has been stated aboves, I disagree with the view that elderly people get no financial support from the government while they tired. And I strongly support that government should give some financial support to elderly people specially in the medical expenditure.
People
have
different
views about
whether or not
governments
should
help
senior citizens. I completely disagree with the
idea
that
elderly
people
should receive no
support
from the state.
First
, there are
different
social
class
which has a varied range of salary number. In this situation,
some
people
may not be capable of affording their
retire
life on their
own
while others do not worry about running out of supplies at their
retire
age. To name a few, a part-time worker or a blue-collar worker may earn the number
just
meet
as much as his daily needs. While they are too
old
to work, they lose their source of income and
be put
in
financial
difficulties. To contrast, a manager or a white-collar may earn
much
than a blue-collar and be able of saving for his
retire
consumption. Out of the reason that all workers
make
a huge
contribute
to our state economy and tax income, it seems to be more justice and
fair
when the
government
be
responsible of
affording their
retire
expenditure.
Apart from that,
elderly
people
need more
financial
support
for their
health
care
in general
. As the
health
care of older
people
are always expensive and the
old
have more chance to
get
extra
health
expenditure such as
some
routine
health
examine or
some
chronic treatment. Those medicine treatments tend to be persistent and have expensive charge.
From what has
been stated
aboves
, I disagree with the view that
elderly
people
get
no
financial
support
from the
government
while they tired. And I
strongly
support
that
government
should give
some
financial
support
to
elderly
people
specially
in the medical expenditure.
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