Governments should focus spending only on public services, not waste on the arts. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1
Governments should focus spending only on public services, not waste on the arts. v. 1
People believe that it is necessary for governments to focus investing money in public services rather than waste on the arts. In my opinion, I disagree with that, I think that authorities should focus spending money on both public services and the arts.
On the one hand, governments had better spend a large amount of their budget on public services. Firstly, public services are the things such as hospitals, schools, roads, … which significantly impact on people’s quality of life. For instance, unless governments focus investing enough money for hospitals, the health of citizens will become worse, and more and more people can die of diseases. Other example is that if schools are not spent enough money for, children will not be fully educated that leads to their lack of knowledge and culture in the future. Similarly, if roads are not invested enough money, people will be difficult and dangerous in traffic because of traffic jams, accidents, rough surface of roads, …
On the other hand, government should not completely neglect the arts. Firstly, unless there is governments’ support, art structures will fall into the danger of closing, and many arts institutions could not earn much profits. Secondly, when governments invest money in the arts, the arts can attract many tourists that results in tourism industry development. For example, in Vietnam, government spent a part of budget on preserving historical sites such as Hung Pagoda, the old quarter, … and supporting money for building art structures as museums, theaters, entertainment parks, … so that there are many people go to visit. Thirdly, many people get pleasure and entertain and relax when they go to the arts.
To sum up, I think government should note investing money not only in public services but also in the arts.
People
believe that it is necessary for
governments
to focus investing
money
in
public
services
rather
than waste on the
arts
. In my opinion, I disagree with that, I
think
that authorities should focus spending
money
on both
public
services
and the arts.
On the one hand,
governments
had better spend a large amount of their budget on
public
services
.
Firstly
,
public
services
are the things such as hospitals, schools, roads, … which
significantly
impact on
people’s
quality of life.
For instance
, unless
governments
focus investing
enough
money
for hospitals, the health of citizens will become worse, and more and more
people
can
die
of diseases. Other example is that if schools are not spent
enough
money
for, children will not be
fully
educated that leads to their lack of knowledge and culture in the future.
Similarly
, if roads are not invested
enough
money
,
people
will be difficult and
dangerous
in traffic
because
of traffic jams, accidents, rough surface of roads, …
On the other hand
,
government
should not completely neglect the
arts
.
Firstly
, unless there is
governments’
support,
art
structures will fall into the
danger
of closing, and
many
arts
institutions could not earn
much
profits.
Secondly
, when
governments
invest
money
in the
arts
, the
arts
can attract
many
tourists that results in tourism industry development.
For example
, in Vietnam,
government
spent a part of budget on preserving historical sites such as Hung Pagoda, the
old
quarter, … and supporting
money
for building
art
structures as museums, theaters, entertainment parks, …
so
that there are
many
people
go to visit.
Thirdly
,
many
people
get
pleasure and entertain and relax when they go to the arts.
To sum up, I
think
government
should note investing
money
not
only
in
public
services
but
also
in the
arts
.
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40Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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