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Governments should be responsible for funding and controlling scientific research rather than private organizations. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.6

Governments should be responsible for funding and controlling scientific research rather than private organizations. v. 6
Scientific research plays an imperative role in the progress of a nation. Some people stick to the point that government funding for scientific studies instead of private organizations. However, I believe that is better if both government and private institutions be responsible for scientific research hands together. To begin with, the prime reason why government is responsible of provides feasibility for research resources, lies in a fact that authorities have enough budget and investment as opposed to private organizations cannot support researchers monetary reliance of oneself as well as possible. For example, the investigation of some chronic and severe illnesses needs a large amount of money. Even though, the private corporations funded explorations won’t provide favourable outcome on that. As a result, people based their on unbiased knowledge. Therefore, government must be accountable for the security and welfare of people that relate to scientific research. On the other hand, when funding for researchers comes from two organizations have more possibility to achieve reliable results because government and private institution with each other can provide more money and opportunities for scientists; For instance, government offer new inventions such as a new phone or laptop to people when that are tasted completely and it takes time more than enough. Although, some companies have enormous money invested in such research that help researchers gain to their incomes in a short time. In conclusion, I believe scientists have a right to support from government in scientific scope. Nonetheless, private organizations can raise the quality of scientific research with government help government.
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plays an imperative role in the progress of a nation.
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Some
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people
stick to the point that
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government
funding for
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scientific
studies
instead
of
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private
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organizations
.
However
, I believe
that is
better if both
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government
and
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private
institutions be responsible for
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scientific
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research
hands together.

To
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begin
with, the prime reason why
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government
is
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responsible of
provides feasibility for
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research
resources, lies in a fact that authorities have
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enough
budget and investment as opposed to
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private
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organizations
cannot support researchers monetary reliance of oneself
as well
as possible.
For example
, the investigation of
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some
chronic and severe illnesses needs a large amount of money.
Even though
, the
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private
corporations funded explorations won’t provide
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favourable
outcome on that.
As a result
,
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people
based their on unbiased knowledge.
Therefore
,
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government
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must
be accountable for the security and welfare of
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people
that relate to
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scientific
research.

On the other hand
, when funding for researchers
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comes
from two
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organizations
have more possibility to achieve reliable results
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because
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government
and
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private
institution with each other can provide more money and opportunities for scientists;
For instance
,
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government
offer new inventions such as a new phone or laptop to
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people
when that
are tasted
completely and it takes time more than
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enough
.
“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
,
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some
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companies
have enormous money invested in such
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research
that
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help
researchers gain to their incomes in a short time.

In conclusion
, I believe scientists have a right to support from
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government
in
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scientific
scope. Nonetheless,
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private
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organizations
can raise the quality of
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scientific
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research
with
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government
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help
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government
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Governments should be responsible for funding and controlling scientific research rather than private organizations. v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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