It is believed that regimes should concentrate to enhance the better sports and art facilities in schools instead of spending money on the programs to provide entertainment to the people. I agree with the former view.
Admittedly, in some situations or places, it is necessary to spend some money on the events for the enjoyment of the general public. The one main reason to consider behind is that political parties do it to increase their vote bank. With the concerts and sports programs, political leaders win the faith of people and promote their party without spending the single penny of the party budget. However, in reality, it is the need of the hour to spend money for the promotion of the sports, arts and culture in the schools to produce the skilled persons which will really help to raise the economic and social slandered of the nation.
Undeniably, there are so many benefits of spending money in the schools for the development of sports and art culture. The first and foremost reason behind is that schools kids are the future of the nation. It becomes the social obligation of the regime to provide the better sports facilities at the school level to inculcate the habit and interests for the sports and art, which they can adopt as a profession in the future. Another reason to consider is that nowadays, school children are getting depressed owing to the burden of the study. They cannot spare time for playing sports because they always get busy to fulfil the school' s tasks, here it is the responsibility of the governments to spend money to construct the great sports infrastructure in schools so that students can keep them away from the worries and tensions of study.
To conclude, although spending money on the concerts and sports tournaments is also imperative for the social causes, however, governments should consider more to spend money to promote the sports and art culture at schools to produce the better.
It
is believed
that regimes should concentrate to enhance the better
sports
and
art
facilities in
schools
instead
of
spending
money
on the programs to provide entertainment to the
people
. I
agree
with the former view.
Admittedly
, in
some
situations or places, it is necessary to
spend
some
money
on the
events
for the enjoyment of the
general public
. The one main reason to consider behind is that political parties do it to increase their vote bank. With the concerts and
sports
programs, political leaders win the faith of
people
and promote their party without
spending
the single penny of the party budget.
However
, in reality, it is the need of the hour to
spend
money
for the promotion of the
sports
,
arts
and culture in the
schools
to produce the skilled persons which will
really
help
to raise the economic and social slandered of the nation.
Undeniably
, there are
so
many
benefits of
spending
money
in the
schools
for the development of
sports
and
art
culture. The
first
and foremost reason behind is that
schools
kids are the future of the nation. It becomes the social obligation of the regime to provide the better
sports
facilities at the
school
level to inculcate the habit and
interests for
the
sports
and
art
, which they can adopt as a profession in the future. Another reason to consider is that nowadays,
school
children are getting depressed owing to the burden of the study. They cannot spare time for playing
sports
because
they always
get
busy to fulfil the
school&
#039; s tasks, here it is the responsibility of the
governments
to
spend
money
to construct the great
sports
infrastructure in
schools
so
that students can
keep
them away from the worries and tensions of study.
To conclude
, although
spending
money
on the concerts and
sports
tournaments is
also
imperative for the social causes,
however
,
governments
should consider more to
spend
money
to promote the
sports
and
art
culture at
schools
to produce the better.
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39Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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