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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads do you extend agree or disagree with this statement v.1

Government should spend money on railways rather than roads do you extend agree or disagree with this statement v. 1
In the materialistic era, technology is changing in transportation in all countries of the world. We can't proudly say that the transportation is not bad. Although the government is spending money equally on railways as well as roads, which keep to stay connected with other cities, yet some individuals claim that the authorities ought to use the money on the railways than roads. I strongly agree with the given statement. I will discuss the some possible reasons, which are behind this phenomenon in the following paragraphs before any specific conclusion. To begin with, there are many causes why people ponder that the government should utilise most money on railways. The first reason is that trains are inexpensive than other modes of transportation. Those people who are unable to approach the travel of an air. For their people, rails are the best way to go anywhere by the trains, it is an affordable for the poor people. It saves their time, which they can spend on other things. Thus, people considered that the government should invest the money on the trains. In addition to this, we know very well, trains are faster. To illustrates expect to trains, there are many modes of transportation are quite slow, when they are travelling by train it saves their time. They choose rails for long distance while travelling as well as trains provide many amenities to the passengers. Trains of compartments are fuller spacious. They able to sit properly then other modes of transportation. Therefore, layman opine that rails should be improved by the government as soon as possible. On the flip side, some experts reckon that the government should donate the money on roads rather than rails. First and foremost step is that people know that many times trains are delayed their journey. Those people who don't like to wait the trains. So authorities should forge the money on roads, as roads keep to stay connected with other cities. To conclude, although government is generating many facilities on all modes of transportation as well as for the peoples' life better, yet those people who think that government should spend the money on rails. Their thinking is bad, as there will be many chances increase the population on railway stations. So government should spend the money equally on the trains as well as roads, which can be progress or the all countries of the world.
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transportation
in all countries of the world. We can't
proudly
say that the
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transportation
is not
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bad
. Although the
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government
is spending
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money
equally
on
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railways
as
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well
as
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roads
, which
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keep to stay
connected with
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other
cities,
yet
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some
individuals claim that the authorities ought to
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use
the
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money
on the
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railways
than
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roads
. I
strongly
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agree
with the
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given
statement. I will discuss the
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some
possible reasons, which are behind this phenomenon in the following paragraphs
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before
any specific conclusion.

To
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begin
with, there are
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many
causes why
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people
ponder that the
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government
should
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utilise
most
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money
on
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railways
. The
first
reason is that
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trains
are
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inexpensive
than
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other
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modes
of
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transportation
. Those
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people
who are unable to approach the travel of an air. For their
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people
, rails are the best way to go anywhere by the
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trains
, it is an affordable for the poor
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people
. It saves their time, which they can spend on
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other
things.
Thus
,
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people
considered that the
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government
should invest the
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money
on the trains.

In addition
to this, we know
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very
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well
,
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trains
are faster. To illustrates
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expect
to
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trains
, there are
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many
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modes
of
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transportation
are quite slow, when they are travelling by
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train
it saves their time. They choose rails for long distance while travelling as
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well
as
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trains
provide
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many
amenities to the passengers.
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Trains
of compartments are fuller spacious.
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able to sit
properly
then
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other
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modes
of
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transportation
.
Therefore
, layman opine that rails should be
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improved
by the
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government
as
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soon
as possible.

On the flip side,
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some
experts reckon that the
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government
should donate the
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money
on
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roads
rather
than rails.
First
and foremost step is that
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people
know that
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many
times
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trains
are delayed
their journey. Those
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people
who don't like to wait the
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trains
.
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So
authorities should forge the
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money
on
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roads
, as
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roads
The verb 'keep' is used with the gerund form: "keep staying".
keep to stay
connected with
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other
cities.

To conclude
, although
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government
is generating
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many
facilities on all
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modes
of
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transportation
as
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well
as for the peoples' life better,
yet
those
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people
who
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think
that
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government
should spend the
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money
on rails. Their thinking is
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bad
, as there will be
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many
chances increase the population on
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railway
stations.
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So
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government
should spend the
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money
equally
on the
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trains
as
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well
as
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roads
, which can be progress or the all countries of the world.
18Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
64Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Government should spend money on railways rather than roads do you extend agree or disagree with this statement v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
400 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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